I have a character, I'll call her Elena for now, who I need to develop an acute mental break after witnessing one of her good friends being abducted for the slave trade and nearly being taken herself. The story roughly takes place in 16th century Poland and she's about 18 years old
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(Particularly with bipolar, which I know a fair amount about, it's really easy to go from functioning to an absolute mess fairly quickly if you don't get enough sleep. I agree that it's rarely a single event, but having a bunch of friends abducted could certainly be the first trigger that led to a character having a hard time sleeping, relying on drugs or alcohol to sleep, etc. etc.)
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The OP stated of the character, "originally her personality was very sweet, caring, sensitive, forgiving, and she believed in nonviolence." That does not necessarily suggest the existence of an extant mental illness. Also, the extreme conditions of the "acute mental break": catatonic immediately following the event and then from there to have hallucinations, flashbacks, triggers that set her off, and nonsensical talking are extreme, insofar as they would manifest all at once. High doses of LSD make more sense.
This is basically the M*A*S*H Hawkeye goes crazy trope. Hawkeye witnesses something terrible or is triggered by a memory into a "breakdown". Then he's cured in one visit by the avuncular psychiatrist, Sidney. It's total bunk, although the average reader not familiar with mental illness will certainly still buy into it.
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Good luck!
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PTSD is definitely a possibility. (Caused by the event.) You could also have her have the underlying conditions for bipolar or schizophrenia, neither of which would be *caused* by the incident, but either of which could certainly be triggered by it. (And at 18, it's entirely possible she'd never had an episode before, as both tend to surface late teens/early 20s.) All three of these can involve catatonic periods, hallucinations, and periods of normalcy.
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