FIC: Ink

Jul 14, 2014 16:35

Ink
Characters: Sam and Dean
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1075
Summary: The darkness is alive, and it’s killing Sam.

A/N: I wrote another hurt Sam one-shot in an attempt to get myself out of a rut. Enjoy!

He can't breathe in the ink, it's choking him, filling his mouth and spilling down his chin. )

fanfiction, supernatural

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madebyme_x July 18 2014, 11:18:47 UTC
I love a good h/c fic and you did a wonderful job here!

I liked how you focused on the brothers and Sam's pain and confusion, without explaining how they got in that situation. Pure h/c!

Thanks for sharing :)

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little_creek96 July 18 2014, 11:50:05 UTC
Thanks! I wasn't sure if I should end it there, without any explaining, but I'm glad you found it ok!

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freya922 July 18 2014, 11:20:57 UTC
The ink is such a deliciously creepy concept - really made me uncomfortable (in a good way)! Part of it was never being sure if it was real or part of an illusion or... Sammy mental issue. Good job!

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little_creek96 July 18 2014, 11:51:38 UTC
Aw, thanks!

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soserendipity July 18 2014, 12:41:42 UTC
Wow, this was intense even though I have no idea what really happened - or maybe because of it. Good jop on the creepiness! Hurt/comfort is one of my favorite flavors and this one was superb. I also enjoyed how you stripped this down to a few basic instincts of both brothers, that anchored the story very well. Thank you very much for sharing!

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little_creek96 July 19 2014, 01:46:36 UTC
Thank you! :D

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caranfindel July 18 2014, 12:56:57 UTC
This is wonderful. I love that it's kind of vague and you don't know what really happened.

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little_creek96 July 19 2014, 01:47:03 UTC
I love that you love that about it!

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zana_zira July 18 2014, 17:32:09 UTC
little_creek96 July 19 2014, 01:47:30 UTC
Thanks so much!

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