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"Paper Crown" [4/20]

Jun 14, 2009 03:07

Title: Paper Crown [4/20]
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho, Yoochun/Junsu
Genre: AU, drama/romance
Warnings: None
Summary: Sequel to Music Is My Life. It's early 2009 and Jaejoong finds himself forced to entertain a certain businessman with no intention of leaving until he finds what he's looking for.

( Still, if he had to be honest with himself, Junsu's offer was tempting )

dbsk, au, multi-chaptered, paper crown

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soft_daisy July 6 2009, 07:00:04 UTC

It took some hovering around the general vicinity of the phone before he worked up the nerve to dial.
gosh, i seriously love your writing. ^^ it's so witty/funny, but concise all at the same time. and it reminds me of (good, slightly "longer" ^^) words that i haven't been using since i've gone off to college (because my major isn't really about writing )':

anyway, i really loved the scene with the phone call to junsu. especially things like this:
"Really?" Junsu sounded pleased, though still a little wary of the odd things coming out of Yunho's mouth.
"Yes." And if he sounded desperate, he trusted Junsu to ignore it.
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"I don't know, you sounded a little like you were on the brink there." junsu is so sharp and on the lookout for his friend's well-being, while i like how yunho (in the back of his mind) seems to understand himself and his immediate feelings (like desperation) really really well. :)) haha, of course, correct me if i'm misinterpreting this. xD ( ... )

soft_daisy July 6 2009, 07:03:05 UTC

"his sister thought he" haha, sry for the typo.
and i forgot to apologize for reading and posting a comment so late, so sorry (lols, i think i'm always late in replying). i didn't think that summer classes would be just as bad as classes during the regular schoolyr. :(

soft_daisy December 21 2009, 05:54:05 UTC

lols, it seems like forever since i last wrote this comment and read this chapter. ^^

i'm tempted to tell you to please update and i'll bribe you with cookies :DD but i can understand if you've lost interest in writing the story or if recent events have made it hard for you to continue writing for this fandom.

<3 anyways, just wanted to say hi and that i miss your writing. ^_____^

little_bibelot December 21 2009, 08:22:36 UTC

:( You're right that my interest in this fandom (not this story though!) has weaned but I absolutely intend on finishing this. I'm going to be selfish as a writer for a moment and admit that I'm currently trying out a bunch of fandoms and sort of branching out in order to write a wider variety of characters (as you can probably tell).

I miss hearing from all of the regular readers of MIML/PC too. I will try to update this fic soon, but I can't promise anything. I really appreciate this comment though, like you would not believe ♥ Thanks for this.

little_bibelot December 21 2009, 08:34:07 UTC

*and I totally meant waned. LOL

soft_daisy December 21 2009, 09:54:05 UTC

lols :D
don't worry (what you're doing sounds really cool) and i'm already really glad that you intend to finish this story (since i love the characters you have created in a sense), soon or not.

weee, and you are so nice for always saying that you appreciate my comments ♥ so ty

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