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little_bibelot

"Impressions at First Sight" [1/1]

Sep 07, 2008 06:54

Title: Impressions at First Sight [1/1]
Pairing: Yunho/Changmin
Genre: AU, drama/romance
Warnings: Basically, nothing happens. Cameos from Heechul and Jessica.
Words: 7569
Summary: While looking to hire a personal assistant, Jung Yunho finds himself visiting a hospital room every week for the next seven months.

( I don't think I can stand another evening of his company while listening to him sigh into a glass of perfectly good ice wine )

dbsk, au, one-shot

Comments 98

flame_angel88 September 7 2008, 11:31:48 UTC

This is one of the best HoMin fics that I've ever read. An illogical love sliding into place perfectly &hearts

flame_angel88 September 7 2008, 11:35:43 UTC

By the way, I love the cameos to bits, especially HeeChul's. The way his rest his chin daintily or flicking his red hair spells out his fascinating presence loudly.

You should write moarr!!

little_bibelot September 9 2008, 04:26:52 UTC

This is one of the best HoMin fics that I've ever read.

Wow. Wooooow. You have no idea how flattered I am. I didn't expect that at ALL. =) This fic started out as an idea "hey wouldn't it be fun to make Min go into a coma and have Ho fall in love with him :DD?" and I wrote it with no expectations at all.

I'm so so so glad you liked it~ And yay to you liking my Heechul XDDD
I will try my best to write, even though school has started for me :(

♥♥♥ Thanks for always being so kind~ I look forward to your comments every time I post X3

reader_a September 7 2008, 11:32:33 UTC

that was lovely!
Junsu is a scary friend, but a very good friend.
Thanks for sharing ^^

little_bibelot September 9 2008, 04:27:34 UTC

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading/leaving me a comment X3 ♥

kuro_wolf September 7 2008, 11:32:45 UTC

O_O...
OMG! I cant believe you ended it right when i was leaning so far of my seat! But all in all it was a well written piece, i dunno y but nowadays i have been favoring this couple. Keep up the good work!

little_bibelot September 9 2008, 04:41:13 UTC

I'm sorry! ^^; That was the ending I had in mind about 1/3 into writing this fic and I decided to stick with it even though it does seem rather abrupt.

HoMin does seem to be on the rise, which kinda contributed to my desire to see if I could pull off writing one.

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading! ♥

xiahtic September 7 2008, 11:38:32 UTC

i really liked it! the only advice i could possibly give is maybe flesh out the ending a little bit? give us more, if that makes sense? it feels like the story isn't finished. :)))) otherwise, great job.

little_bibelot September 9 2008, 04:43:43 UTC

I'm glad you did! ^^

I did think about writing a more rounded conclusion but I felt that by not revealing why Changmin applied (I do have theories but not concrete ones 8D;;; Shows I didn't think too far ahead *ahem*) it shows that for Yunho, it's not JUST about finding an answer to that anymore. They have much more ahead of them~

Thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it! ♥

err_rainjung September 7 2008, 12:19:49 UTC

I know why you wrote this.
:D

The best HoMin fic I've ever read. Period.
I can't wait to read more of your works.~

little_bibelot September 9 2008, 05:31:40 UTC

Oh is that why? X333 ♥♥♥♥♥ It means a lot to me that you feel that way towards this fic. It really started out as something I did with no expectations for and the response has been amazing, including yours.

I hope my other/future works is just as enjoyable for you ^^ Thanks for reading!