Comments | lithiumxroses: to write a story

lithiumxroses

Aug 06, 2009 19:53

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rephen August 7 2009, 03:36:33 UTC

Very emotive. Is it the end or the beginning of a story?

You have a way that speaks volume of the characters' sadness. I enjoyed reading this.

lithiumxroses August 7 2009, 04:27:42 UTC

That's what I'm having trouble deciding. What do you think? I mean, it's nice as it is, but there are several ways to expand it.

Thank you!

rephen August 7 2009, 06:10:12 UTC

Beginning, I'd say. Then flashback to the time when they are still together.

But it's really up to you :)

lithiumxroses August 7 2009, 20:24:17 UTC

sounds like a good idea! i'll see if i can maybe make it work. no guarantees, my muse only wakes up every few months! XDD

rephen August 8 2009, 06:40:45 UTC

:) Just do it when your muse sings to you :) It's best that way!

I think I'll friend-add you here on LJ, if you dont mind? :)

lithiumxroses August 8 2009, 14:34:20 UTC

'Course not! I'll add you too.

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