Chapter Twenty Five of L&L

[litania87]

Author’s Note: Thank you so very much for my friend Kathy (kittie8571) who is the Beta of this story!

Chapter Twenty Five: Three arguments, two decisions and one break up

Comments

[bentgyro]

Somehow I've deleted my first post! I'll start again.
Great update. The riddle that Jack's father left is so mysterious and unraveling a little at a time. Your characters are so interesting and well drawn. I eagerly await further updates!
Thank you!!
HT

Great Update

[joetheone]

I don't mind waiting for an update. I like it sometimes. But, I hate it when someone just gives up without trying to finish. So I"m happy to hear you are going to continue on. I think it was good Uncle Daniel went to visit this girl and her reaction was quite strange. I'm looking forward to more of this. I sure hope Matilda is ok. I think it would really be horrible for Jack if something were to happen to this kind women. Ennis and Helen well that is like oil and water together, I am sure that soon they will be battling against each other in court and that should be a battle to watch. Yes, security is good but sometimes it is aggravating and hard to deal with. Joe

[fl1789]

Hey! A late update is still an update, so I don't complain ;))
I love this boys of yours and I'd wait for them forever!!

not such a fan of that crazy Helen,though : D

until next one,

fl.

[ramona4jake]

Good to see you and your story back ! So Hanna's secret deepens.... what on earth did Enrique to her, or is it her mom ? I'm sorry for Matilda, I wish she let Jack and the doctors help her, I'm sure they can do something, at least to ease the pain ! And isn't that Frederic a pain in the ... ?
Thank you, cannot wait for more !

[sytle]

Thank you for this chapter,there is lots going on and E and J are going to have their hands full in the future.
The storyline is very interesting,I love reading about your Jack and Ennis.

Sytle