Comments | lit_gal: Gray

lit_gal

Gray

Jun 10, 2013 09:37

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mulder200 June 10 2013, 16:55:34 UTC

Poor Xander! He is so confused but running away won't solve anything.

lit_gal June 12 2013, 00:31:05 UTC

He is completely confused, but in his defense, he's never had to deal with anything like this.

shakatany June 10 2013, 19:36:41 UTC

I'm glad the motor has revved up for some plot-driving. Can't yet visualize where you are going with this but I know I will enjoy the journey.

Shakatany

lit_gal June 12 2013, 00:31:30 UTC

There is plot here... I have some vague ideas, but at least now there's an engine driving this bus.

hawk_soaring June 10 2013, 22:51:20 UTC

Poor Xan -- but I still love the babble. :)

lit_gal June 12 2013, 00:31:39 UTC

He is a little lost.

chaoskir June 11 2013, 05:22:44 UTC

Oh yeah! I do love that Spike doesn't hesitate. Awesome update! Great story!

lit_gal June 12 2013, 00:32:07 UTC

Spike can't afford to hesitate. If he wants to keep control of Xander, he has to get Xander's total submission.

sparrow2000 June 12 2013, 00:08:13 UTC

This is getting more complicated by the day, but I'm definitely along for the ride!

lit_gal June 12 2013, 00:32:30 UTC

My stories tend to get progressively more complicated as they go. It's a curse.

zazreil June 23 2013, 05:53:03 UTC

No for your readers it's a JOY!