Gray, Chapter nine

[lit_gal]

Comments

[shakatany]

Yay. Hey I seem to be the first. Love how Spike doesn't want Xander turning evil.

Did he ever comment about the return of Xander's eye or am I mixing things up?

More when you can.

Shakatany

[lit_gal]

You are definitely first. Spike understands what it means to have a soul and have the weight of evil on it, so he's not going to want a friend to suffer that. And the eye bit is in the chapter I just posted.

[chaoskir]

Or it looks like as Spike as a Dom to a sub-Xander. I do love this thought!!
Great chapter! Loved and enjoyed it!

[lit_gal]

Spike is a very flexible character... top, bottom, sideways... it's all good with him. But with Xander in new territory, I can see Spike taking charge.

[lit_gal]

Spike really does have all those memories. He knows how it will tear at Xander if he loses control

Gray 9

[slashpuppy]

I'm sooo looking forward to seeing how Spike keeps Xander in hand! :-)

Wee fixes:
- Soulded Spike [Souled]
- school-girl thing [schoolgirl]
- Catholic girl outfit [Catholic schoolgirl outfit]
- Xander tried mentally sort through that fact. [to mentally sort]
- You're demon, luv. [You’re a demon, luv.]
- "Um, say 'good riddance?'" ['good riddance'?"]
- no way is Giles the obsessive do anything to get his demon sort [obsessive-do-anything-to-get-his-demon sort]?

Re: Gray 9

[lit_gal]

Spike may have to take some drastic steps ;)

And thank you for those catches. This one has some rough spots.

[starkat75]

Love it! Can't wait to read the next part! :)

[lit_gal]

I'm not going as fast as I'd wanted on this, but it is up now.