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gail19 January 16 2010, 01:21:07 UTC
Fantastic chapter / epilogue. Poor Blair really believes he wouldn't melt in anyone's month doesn't he?

Sorry to see this coming to an end. Hopefully the muses bring you back soon.

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gail19 January 17 2010, 04:57:30 UTC
Thank you!

And I return the sentiment. Your dragon is wonderful. The mix of colors set off beautifully by giant liquid black eyes.

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lit_gal January 17 2010, 16:14:10 UTC
This just feels like an end to this part, but I do think I'll wander over this way again some day.

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lit_gal January 17 2010, 16:14:51 UTC
Thank you so much. I really had fun writing the dialogue, so I suspect any sequel would focus on the boys' sniping more than the adventure.

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amycat1959 June 9 2010, 10:08:58 UTC
I really had fun writing the dialogue

Your dialog ROCKS! Just loved bits like this:

"...letting him walk into the lions' den while keeping him safe from the lions is not an easy job, especially given his habit of calling 'here, kitty kitty kitty'..."

I could spend all day reading the boys' sniping...

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hawk_soaring January 16 2010, 01:24:01 UTC
Yay! :) Loved every word.

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lit_gal January 17 2010, 16:15:04 UTC
Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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ladyivy January 16 2010, 01:33:01 UTC
very nice

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lit_gal January 17 2010, 16:15:11 UTC
Thank you!

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bumpkin_is January 16 2010, 01:33:52 UTC
I so just got caught up and I nearly passed out when I finished reading the last one to see 'epilogue' pop up a bare refresh later... and WOOT! Such an awesome ride! I totally loved this and will be waiting with great anticipation for whenever your muse decides to revisit this 'verse. :)

thank you so much for sharing,
Marns
~pN

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lit_gal January 17 2010, 16:16:16 UTC
This one really did fly out... no effort required. I'm so glad you enjoyed this--it was a very different writing style for me.

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