what not to wear

[lissie_pissie]

Title: What Not to Wear
Summary: Small memories are tied into Cuddy's clothes as we watch her get ready on a cold, snowy morning.
Spoilers: um, her clothes? from Kids, Who's Your Daddy, and The Socratic Method.
Notes: This is my first fic, yay. And I wrote it because, lol, I was in the shower yesterday and all of the sudden my brain started

Comments

[leiascully]

A little self-congratulatory on Cuddy's part, maybe, but I loved it anyway. Yay, wardrobes that double as secret weapons!

[lissie_pissie]

thanks for the constructive criticism, love!! i kind of don't understand, was it the tapestry line? the part about her seeing her reflection in the car mirror? im not being cocky, im SURE it's there, you definitely know writing. i just dont get it, i just might be stupid. BUT THANKS FOR READING ANYWAYS!!

[leiascully]

You're not stupid! It just felt like you were trying to get really close to Cuddy's consciousness and praising her so highly at the same time and I'm not sure she thinks of herself in quite those terms: all that elegance, beauty, etc. Most women are a little insecure, and although Cuddy shouldn't be, I bet she is. But I really liked the richness of detail.

[lissie_pissie]

you know what? you're totally right. i can't try and mix how *I* see her and how she sees herself. totally get it, thanks so much. ill watch out for that next time.

[leiascully]

She's worth every word! But she may not believe it.

Good work, though! It's a promising start!