I can't help myself ...

[liresius]

You know how once you let something go (as in publish it?) you then feel relaxed enough to play with it ... and sometimes when you do that, the results are better, or at least pleasingly different? ... Yes, I lost the neural interface that was integral to the fic but I played around spiking Sheppard's hair which is always waaay satisfying!! Here

Comments

[sgamadison]

OOOH, I think I like this one even better. The rust makes a nice contrast and I like the image of McKay floating above John's head, with him looking up at it. Very nice!

[liresius]

*beams* Thank you! I'm really glad you like it. Yeah, there are a lot of things I like better about this one, and the rust is one of them - also John's hair is WILDER! LOL! Always a good thing, IMO! If only because Rodney can bitch about it (in all affection) more!

The John cap (and mostly because of his eye direction) was chosen to match with a certain scene in Indelible - he was using his peripheral vision at the time and while Rodney was standing, John was "lower" in that same scene, so I'm really happy you picked up on that spatial relationship.

Thank you again!

[sgamadison]

Just put Indelible on the 'read' list tonight. Am looking forward to coming home from work, kicking back and enjoying the evening!

[liresius]

It's a definite "to read" one! Have fun with it! I think you'll like the characterization - not fluffy, but the love is there underlying ...

[sgamadison]

Oooh, my kind of story then. Thanks for pointing the way. Your cover definitely made me want to go check it out!

[liresius]

There's angst too, of course (on the way to that underlying love) and some very solid OCs too, that made the fic intriguing to read. Have fun!