Twin Souls: Chapter 31: The Caves

Sep 21, 2010 21:34

Title: Chapter 31: The Caves
Arc: Twin Souls
Characters: Academy Jyuushiro and Shunsui
Rating: PG for bad language. *laughs*
Word Count: ~5570
Summary: Jyuushiro and Shunsui do their best to get the villages out from the threat of a huge crowd of Hollows.
Beta: incandescens, without whom this story would not exist.
Author's Notes: I know, it's been a while, ( Read more... )

kyouraku, fanfic, writing, ukitake, bleach

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missingkitsune September 22 2010, 04:09:52 UTC
very nice. *haha and yes i'm posting comments on all the places it follow you*

i'm quite happy to see a new chapter for this arc. it captivates me completely.

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liralen September 23 2010, 02:39:33 UTC
Hoorah! I love comments everywhere! It's fun to get them. Thank you so much!

Yay! I'm so glad to get back on this, it's just... amazing.

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sophiap September 22 2010, 10:41:26 UTC
Oooh, very nice, and some tantalizing appearances of some familiar names.

I love your take at pre-canon Soul Society, and how things are (mis) managed by the noble families.

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liralen September 23 2010, 02:40:24 UTC
The history is just fun, and I love trying to extrapolate back and how things had to have changed. *laughs*

It's fun to have Shunsui and Jyuushiro be outraged at things... *grins*

Thank you!

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ginnyvos September 22 2010, 10:58:53 UTC
Ooooh you have no idea how happy I was to spot a new chapter! I've come to love this story so dearly... And do I see an ancestor to Soy Fong there? :D

Great chapter, love the little baby and the insight in Shiba-sama and the culture and... *heaves a content sigh* yeah. Lovely.

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liralen September 23 2010, 02:51:58 UTC
*beams* Yes! Yes, you do!

I'm so happy to be writing this again. *sighs happily*

I'm so glad to know what it is that you enjoyed. Thank you so much!

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mainekosama September 22 2010, 15:26:48 UTC
I think this is my favourite Bleach story. Jyuushiro and Shunsui (and everybody else) are perfect.

I loved the battle scene, especially the part with the baby-on-his-back.

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liralen September 23 2010, 03:02:35 UTC


I'm so glad that you enjoy this! *blushes happily at the perfect* It's nice to know you've been following this!

And I'm very glad to finally get back on this fic. Whew...

Yay! The fights were fun!

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incandescens September 22 2010, 21:31:59 UTC
Thoroughly enjoyed.

And while Chow Yun Fat is cool with a baby strapped to his back, Jyuushiro is even cooler. :)

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liralen September 23 2010, 03:03:02 UTC
Hee!!

Yes. I love the comparison.

Thank you, so much!

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