Silver and Black: Act 1: The Play

Sep 02, 2008 17:04

Title: The Play
Series: Silver and Black
Characters: Chris and David
Genre: Yaoi, modern day romance.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Beta: mysocalledhell Thank you!
Summary: David goes to see Chris in "Shakespeare in Love" and gets a bit more than he bargained for.
Words: 6066
A/N: This is an original story by stark_black and I. She plays Chris and I play David. Hope you ( Read more... )

original, writing, david_old

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liralen September 3 2008, 04:22:21 UTC
Chris is, isn't he? *laughs* Writing David opposite Chris is pretty amazing. *laughs*

I'm very, very glad you enjoyed the story!! And, yeah, there's definitely going to be more. It's interesting loving the writing of a story this much and being to do whatever we like with our characters. Thanks!!

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stark_black September 3 2008, 22:47:21 UTC
I second the loving to be able to do whatever with the characters. x) Freedom is awesome. x)

I'm so glad you're liking it so much! It's always nice when people get excited about stuff that you're excited about writing. xD

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liralen September 3 2008, 04:25:17 UTC
*grins* The pearl blue Audi TT was all my fault. *laughs*

Hmmm... you seem the type. *laughs and laughs* I am so glad we found each other. It's what I'd own if I didn't have to stuff a kid into the back seat. *laughs* There will be a day!! Ahem.

Thank you! More coming! Definitely... can't leave poor David with just his crush and bowl of noodles. (falls over laughing)

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liralen September 3 2008, 18:04:29 UTC
Definitely something to wist for.

Yeah. We're both stronger in the novel/longer writing venue than IM RP kinds of things. And we're good at blending. I really want to try and do sections of it from one viewpoint and then the other, rather than the swap viewpoints every paragraph kind of thing.

Yeah about the last, I'd rather not make the reader work that hard for the story.

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googlymooglies September 3 2008, 03:10:16 UTC
OMG you always write SO WELL T_T

yall rock epicly.

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liralen September 3 2008, 04:25:43 UTC
Thank you!!

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stark_black September 3 2008, 22:57:21 UTC
xD *hugs you*

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sinisterbug September 3 2008, 03:59:13 UTC
Glad to see you out and about and posting. :) This story is great, keep up the good work.

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liralen September 3 2008, 04:28:11 UTC
Indeed, it's a conspiracy to make sure stark_black writes stuff she loves! There needs to be more stark fiction in the world. She rocks so much.

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stark_black September 3 2008, 22:58:04 UTC
Pfft, thanks. *embarrassed* You rock to though. x)

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liralen September 4 2008, 04:20:50 UTC
XD Thank you. *grins*

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xshelaghx September 3 2008, 12:31:10 UTC
*claps* Well done!

I wasn't going to read this because I don't usually care for roleplay fics but you are both such good writers that I thought you might avoid the pitfalls. So far so good! :D You grabbed my interest and I'll be reading it as you post it now.

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liralen September 3 2008, 15:40:12 UTC
*smiles* Thank you! Yay! I'm glad you found it well done, and we kept the chunks larger than normal IM roleplay kinds of stuff, as we're both better writers of larger pieces.

Once it's interactive, it'll get smaller, but... I really want to preserve our strong points, which include the descriptive stuff that sometimes gets tossed in IM play...

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xshelaghx September 4 2008, 03:18:22 UTC
Yes I think the bigger chunks help it read better. Keeping the more interactive sections as readable will be a challenge that I am looking forward to seeing you two manage. :D

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stark_black September 3 2008, 22:59:13 UTC
Sweet! Glad you liked it! And thanks for trying this out even though you don't usually go for RPs! *hugs you*

Oh, is that Lavi in your icon??? *wibbles* xDDD

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