A Peek Under the Hat

[liralen]

Fandom: Bleach
Character: Kyouraku Shunsui
Rating: G
Summary: Shunsui takes a nap.
Word Count: 438

Comments

[incandescens]

Just -- aww. Lovely.

(Note: "the ghost of his powers streamer up into the air" should be "the ghost of his powers to stream up into the air"?)

[liralen]

Thank you!!

I'm so glad you liked. :-)

[liralen]

Changed. :-) Though... I'd wanted to invoke the spirit streams/ribbons that Ishida and Ichigo see at other times... so changed it to something else... thank you for pointing out the awkwardness. It definitely didn't flow the way it was.

[incandescens]

I like that image of ribboning up into the air very much.

[archangelbeth]

My best icon for this. Mmmmm, nice.

[liralen]

Oooo... nice icon.

I think Nanao knows him best. *grin*

[tearraws]

That's gorgeous... I love that character, and you captured him perfectly!

[liralen]

Thank you!

I appreciate the praise. From you that means a lot.

[tearraws]

( blushes )

Really? *^_^* It does? Thank you. *^_^*

Why? I mean... we don't really know each other all that well or anything... I'm not sure if you've even read my stuff... have you? *^_^* Why is my opinion so valuable? If you don't mind me asking, that is. I don't mean to be rude, it just surprised me, is all. *^_^*

[liralen]

*grin*

I've peered at your writing, but I think it was your comment on the fact that you've seen a lot of pieces where people can't really follow the character that really prompted my gratitude.

Discernment is a valuable thing. :-)

[senbonzakura77]

Wonderful characterization of Shunsui-this was brilliantly done. :D

[liralen]

Thank you! I appreciate that a lot.

[shadowsinfire]

Beautiful~

[liralen]

Thank you! I wanted to see what was in his head, and realized it had to be poetry...