I think I might have mentioned once before that I freakin' love this. Every time I read it, I find something new to love. Today it's this:
She looked up and caught his gaze. His head jerked straight and he blinked. He needed to get back to the house, back to Sammy.
Specifically that last sentence. I mean, their father is sitting right next to him, and Dean doesn't even include him in the equation. It's not "they need to get back to Sammy," it's just Dean who does.
Also, more on this later, but I love the structure you've set up. It becomes more apparent as the story develops, but its foundations are right here, and they are, as I have said before, awesome.
Go you!
No, I mean it. Go, you, and write more! You only have six weeks to finish! :-)
Interesting beginning - can't wait to see where this goes from here. I have a sneeking love for fics that explore two timelines, how the characters change and where the threads converge - so I agree! Write more! Thanks for sharing
Thank you! I, too, have a great love for two timeline fics. It's been really, very interesting to play around with the characters and examine who they were at different points of their lives.
Wow, I really like this so far. I can't read chapter two right now but I'm totally itching to read the next chapter. The descriptions alone are perfect. I can see everything they're doing. Spot on characterization as well. Sammy is just so Sammy and Dean's so Dean. Angela is interesting, she's kind of parallel to Sammy, I think. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out, especially more about the past and who the girl was and the future about this hunt and Gillian. Awesome!
I can't believe it's taken me so long to respond to your awesome comments.
Random background tidbit: Angela was initially conceptualized to be the 'Sam' figure in the Dewar family but the more I wrote her the more I discovered that she has an awful lot of Dean parallels as well. I guess that means she was becoming her own person, or something like that. She was also, at one point, a male character who was based on my real life brother. I'll have to be sure and find a good opportunity to my bro that I turned him into a girl. ;-)
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She looked up and caught his gaze. His head jerked straight and he blinked. He needed to get back to the house, back to Sammy.
Specifically that last sentence. I mean, their father is sitting right next to him, and Dean doesn't even include him in the equation. It's not "they need to get back to Sammy," it's just Dean who does.
Also, more on this later, but I love the structure you've set up. It becomes more apparent as the story develops, but its foundations are right here, and they are, as I have said before, awesome.
Go you!
No, I mean it. Go, you, and write more! You only have six weeks to finish! :-)
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OMG, six weeks to finish! I must have missed that ever so "sweet" combination of anxiety and stress if I talked myself into this "wonderful" timeline.
*writes like a mad person*
*loves you*
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I hope you enjoy what's coming next. =D
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Random background tidbit: Angela was initially conceptualized to be the 'Sam' figure in the Dewar family but the more I wrote her the more I discovered that she has an awful lot of Dean parallels as well. I guess that means she was becoming her own person, or something like that. She was also, at one point, a male character who was based on my real life brother. I'll have to be sure and find a good opportunity to my bro that I turned him into a girl. ;-)
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