The Blue, Blue Sky

[liptonrm_fic]

Title: The Blue, Blue Sky
Fandom: Supernatural
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing and am making no profit whatsoever. It’s all Eric Kripke’s and hiyacynth’s and blah blah blah. We all know who the real braintrust is around here

Comments

[hiyacynth]

Okay, listen, missy. This is the sixth time in three days you've made me cry. I just read it again, and I'm all choked up and holy crap what did poor Mandy ever do to me that I should hand her over to Meg like this? And while we're on the subject, what'd she ever do to you? Because I was just gonna not talk about it, but you're like, "No, go on, take a look at the consequences of your actions," and I feel pretty sure that we are bad, bad people.

Sincerely, Megan. This is beautiful and heartbreaking and just... perfect. Thank you.

[liptonrm]

OMG ICON!!!!!!

We are bad, bad people, aren't we? Poor, poor Mandy. I love her so much and yet I can't stop myself from pointing out the horrible things that happened to her.

I have got to stop making you cry, except, I kind of love it that I'm making you cry. See above, re: bad person. ;-) The fact that something I write can touch you means the world to me. Thank you.

[iamstealthyone]

“I’ve got you, babe. I’ve got you.” He whispered into her hair. For a moment she let herself believe that he did.

Poor Mandy! Good job with her POV, with showing how trapped Meg made her feel and how the aftermath has her hurting so badly.

[liptonrm]

Poor Mandy, indeed. I'd feel really bad about what I did to her, except, well, I didn't actually do it. ;-)

I really feel for all of the Tates. They're never, ever going to be the same.

[iamstealthyone]

They really aren't, though at least they're together right now.

[dotfic]

Really well done. So heart-wrenching, and interesting to get Mandy's pov, what she went through.

[liptonrm]

Thank you so much. It was disturbingly easy to fall into Mandy's headspace. Poor, poor woman, of everyone in that story I'm beginning to think she's the one who really got the short end of the stick.

[cunien]

Oooh hoo hoo lovely! And you know, dark. But still lovely. I especially love the first paragraph, with the IV 'dripping peace into her veins'. Brilliant.

Sorry it's taken me so long to get over here - I missed it first time and hiyacynth pointed me this way a couple of days ago, but this is the first chance I've had to read.
x.

[liptonrm]

Dark and lovely are two of my favorite things. ;-)

I'm also especially fond of the first paragraph. So much so that I could only ever work on it on my computer because that was the only place it was stored. For me, the queen of notebook writing, that's kind of strange.

Thanks, my dear. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it.