Road to Nowhere

Feb 20, 2008 20:29

Disclaimer: These characters ARE mine, baby. :)

Title: Road to Nowhere
Word count: 1500
A/N: Trying my hand at a chapter of original fiction here. Fantasy genre. This may or may not go any further, so I'm making no claim to it as a WIP. Just a try at something new.

Chapter One: Out and Back In Again )

original fic, roadtonowhere

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oddsbobs February 21 2008, 05:08:28 UTC
absolutely fantastic

for real

i am intrigued

hooked, if you will



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lionille February 21 2008, 05:11:59 UTC

Thank you SO much. You're really very kind to take the time to try an OF and to be encouraging, too. Thank you.

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oddsbobs February 21 2008, 05:18:51 UTC
hehe

Well, I figured it was written by you, so it had to be good...

lo and behold, I was right!

(seriously, you did a great job. you introduced a main character - giving him a personality in an impossibly few paragraphs - created conflict, a sense of other-worldliness, and most importantly, hinted at background and plot. all without going into too much detail or without being too subtle. excellent pacing for a novel, I believe. *hint hint*)

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lionille February 21 2008, 05:26:37 UTC
Wow, you know how to make a gal feel good, I'm grateful to get such great feedback!
*glances around nervously*
*opens up a word doc. to start Part II*

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oddsbobs February 21 2008, 05:28:11 UTC
hey, i try :D

opens up a word doc. to start Part II

YAY!!

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