Comments | lionille: Crystal Clear

lionille

Crystal Clear

Jan 12, 2008 20:24

Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine.
Written for: glitch_wyatt

Title: Crystal Clear
Characters: Ambrose/Wyatt
Rating: PG-13
Summary: ( There was a fine line between magic and science. )

glitch/cain, tinman, glitchwyatt

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lionille January 13 2008, 03:37:57 UTC

^^ haha, thank you!

lovemyfaceoff January 13 2008, 01:59:04 UTC

This was really really good! 0__0 I can def. understand using that to spy on Cain in the shower. -melts-
When two people are in love and dont realize the other one loves them back I want to scream and smush them together.

lionille January 13 2008, 03:39:02 UTC

Thank you! lol, I wanted to get them together at the end, too. Maybe it needs a part ii.

lovemyfaceoff January 13 2008, 19:24:29 UTC

I think it does.

cooking_spray January 13 2008, 02:15:14 UTC

Cute. I love the duality of this piece, too - ah, good old-fashioned unrequited!love. =]

lionille January 13 2008, 03:37:23 UTC

Thank you very much! :D

archon_mentha January 13 2008, 03:14:39 UTC

I love this. I love the unrequited angst and the circularity of it. I love this line: Ambrose nods at him, like a bird bobbing, one with a black crest of wild hair and plumage in the royal colors. And I'd really, really love a sequel! :)

lionille January 13 2008, 03:36:24 UTC

Thank you! I was inspired by the icon on the bird bit. I'd like to try a sequel, this left me sort of frustrated with their obtuseness, lol.

blackletter January 13 2008, 03:21:32 UTC

Very nice! Others have already pointed these things out, but they're so good I'll say it too. The circular structure of the piece was fantastic, and the mutual (assumed) unrequited love was sad (and frustrating) and makes me want to hit both of them across the head with that crystal ball.

lionille January 13 2008, 03:33:08 UTC

haha, thanks very much. I admit I want very much to do a sequel just to get them sorted out.