Apr 30, 2008 12:53
Greetings to all....
Can someone get me out of this torcher?
Me, no, like, it!
I am in the middle of double spanish and decided to take a brake.
I thought I should rite in here since I haven't for a while and I opolagise.
I'm sorry....
call me organised?
ha, no.
So in my little crazy linlet world, I have been doing loades which means that I should tell you all about it cause I can, and because I want to.
First before anything, I want to sho you something that for me is like really old news but close to getting the results for...
Results? yes.
Me, as crazy as it seems, I have entered a competission that involves writing.
It's not like me to put my writing out there for those scary judges to see.
I decided to enter a 15 lined poem that I wrote. This poem arigenally wasn't 15 lines, but I had to reduce it because that was there limit.
Dam you!
For those who don't no, with writing poetry, I write esays. I swear they are sooooo long....
it's scary!
I had trouble reducing it to what they wanted since when I herd of this comp, I had it already written. I was no way thinking that I would put it in here, but thanks to:
Mrs Sutherland, Nat, and Mary, they thought that I should enter it.
So yay for them or something.
Anyway, to tell you how old this news is, I put it in around 2 or 3 months ago...
I no!
It's really bad. It shows though that I should update this thingy more often. So if I haven't updated for a while, and I've forgot, can someone please tell me?
Thanks.
Ok, I think now it's like time I stop and show you the poem.
This is the arigenal....
always.
When you need a sholder to cry on,
remember that I have a warm embrace,
I'll be here to comfort you,
always.
You will never be alone,
together we'll stand,
I'll be rite by your side,
when you need a helping hand.
Just call out my name,
I'll be rite here,
I'll shield you from the pain,
there's no need to fear.
dont ever give up,
when times get tuff,
I'm rite by your side,
always.
I'll be a lit candle,
guiding you through,
lighting your way,
in everything you do.
I'd help keekp you,
from stumbling over,
the obstacals ahead,
that block your path.
Just call out my name,
I'll be rite here,
I'll shield you from the pain,
there's no need to fear.
don't ever give up,
when times get tuff,
I'll be here to comfort you,
always.
If I light your path,
life is easier,
even strong winds,
my light will not deter.
Just remember,
I'm always here,
in your heart,
close and near.
So just call out my name,
I'll be rite here,
I'll shield you from the pain,
there's no need to fear.
don't ever give up,
when times get tuff,
I'll be here to comfort you,
always.
That's why I'm here,
I'll help you out in every way,
so happyness and love,
in your heart will always stay.
So don't blow me out,
that's one request,
Unless it's me,
you do detest.
Just call out my name,
I'll be rite here,
I'll shield you from the pain,
there's no need to fear.
don't ever give up,
when times get tuff,
I'll be here to comfort you,
always.
How did you think of that? comment?
This is the one that I entered.
Always.
When you need a shoulder to cry on,
Remember I have a warm embrace,
I'll be there to comfort you, always.
Just call out my name, and I'll be right here,
I'll shield you from the pain, there's no need to fear.
Don't ever give up, when times get tuff,
I'll be by your side, always.
If I light your path, life is easier,
Even strong winds, my light will not deter.
I'll be a lit candle, guiding you through,
Lighting your way, in everything you do.
I'd help keep you, from stumbling over,
The obstacles ahead, that blocks your path.
So just remember, I'm always here,
In your heart, close and near.
For those who don't no, this poem is for a friend of mine and you no who you are...
She was going through a difficult time so I wrote this to tell her that I'm always here.
Hugs to you chica.
If I'm wrong and someone tell me, I think that this is done in a different font.
From my memory, this is how I sent it in.
If it is done in a different font, can someone send me a message.
For all you blindies, don't worry about it cause... well lol, there's no point.
The results of this poem will be anounced on the 21st of May.
The prize is $1000 but half of it goes to the school and I also get the poem published in a book. i don't think I will win though lots of people are saying I will. It can't be that grate. Siriously.
Anyway, on other exciting news, I am having another sibling! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy! It's a girl! Squee! I can't wate!
She is going to be a July baby. Hopefully the name might be Tameeka. Omg! I love that name! Some other names that we chose are: Ella, which in spanish is her. lol. I had to put that in....
and Hayden, I told Lorraine that name you gave to me... what was it again? oh god I can't remember....
meh, but she didn't mind it.
School is going fine. I am just handing in asesments, and finally things are going fine with my itinerant. I still miss you loades Mrs Meade. Omg! She was like the best!
It's a shame that she only taught me for one year.
I've also just mooved house and not having the net and phone is a baaaaaaaad. Me no like that!
Arggy.... I hope everything is fine.
I will probably will get the phone today or tomorro and the net hopefully next week.
So if you people want to call me, I have my mobile on me.
Welcome Louise to the land of LJ.
Have fun chica! I will hopefully add you soon and Kaitlyn, you rock! Your like sooooo funny.... you make me lol loades.
Hugs to you both and miss you.
Hayden, thank you sooooo much! You like saved me.... if you read this, not that you will in the next days, but if you do, can you make me a backing track of that song? Please?
Thanks.
Pearl and Andrew, I hope everything is going fine.
and to everyone else, hugs.
I better go now and get back to my work...nooooo.
I'll try and poast more often, I hope?
Hahahaha in like another 2 months time.
Anyways, take care, keep safe, and I'll be back as soon as possible.
Love and light,
Margarita.
Love you all.