The only reason I haven't deleted this is because I love the comments.

May 26, 2005 15:51

Yet another story. Rather girly.

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mattsquared May 28 2005, 01:33:15 UTC
Needs more peen...

and cowbell.

But your use of lackadaisical kicks ass.

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weak ending? misterdeal May 31 2005, 01:20:42 UTC
why, because it didnt conclude with "He sweetly dipped his ballsack in her mouth, and she suckled sweetly on tiny crevaces the formed the wrinckles of his scrotum."

I personally thought the ending kicked ass. Dont get me wrong, the textual pornography isn't so bad either, but I like how you focused on the intimacy as opposed to the actual sexual act. It might just be because of my reading preferance, but nice job either way.

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Re: weak ending? linkinwolf June 1 2005, 16:46:15 UTC
Steebee! A comment from you is like.... something rare and good!

Rood?

Gare?

Hey! That's french for train station! La gare! Would you like to accompany me to the train station? Aimez-vous m'accompagner à la gare?

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