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For The First Time (Part 3)

Sep 24, 2008 20:34

Title: For The First Time - Part 3
Author: xjekkix
Word Count: 1063
Summary: Their first sleepover...
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: This is not real. Simply my interpretation of their early domestic days.

( For The First Time - Part 3 )

Comments 7

ronnielu September 25 2008, 00:56:18 UTC

This is so fun to read! I can't wait for more.

xjekkix September 25 2008, 02:14:38 UTC

thanks so much!

clementinek September 25 2008, 01:51:54 UTC

Thanks for the instant gratification!
This is shaping out to be one "hot" tale.
Can't wait for the next part!
You are building up the suspense in your readers :)

xjekkix September 25 2008, 02:15:16 UTC

Haha I am glad to hear it's suspenseful, and you're enjoying it!

noiamnot September 25 2008, 03:07:32 UTC

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait to read !! this is super good!!
congrats for this amazing story

twinkle_lightss September 25 2008, 03:44:14 UTC

You and these cliffhangers!!! I am loving this. It's so innocent but NOT AT ALL. :)

I am loving your Lindsay btw. I don't feel like people always write her softer side very well and I think you capture the idea of it nicely.

More please!!

littlenikki15 September 25 2008, 04:17:59 UTC

WOOOOOOO
that is all. haha