Friday Night Lights - "Pizza Night", Ensemble, PG

Aug 08, 2009 14:36

Title: Pizza Night
Author: lindentree
Rating: PG
Character(s): Tami, Coach, Julie and Tim
Word Count: 699
Summary: The Taylors and Tim, and that most important of discussions: pizza toppings.
Notes: Takes place during "There Goes The Neighbourhood". This was written for cliche_bingo, for the "food, cooking & mealtimes" prompt on my card. This is kind of an experiment ( Read more... )

friday night lights, fic: mine, cliché bingo 2009

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khemlab August 8 2009, 21:58:21 UTC
You have been busy! This reads really well; I never had trouble figuring out the speaker, and it all flows naturally.

Love the part about them giving Tim hell about not showering, lol. And the fact that it doesn't bother him at all. So Tim.

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lindentree August 12 2009, 00:49:15 UTC
Oh, yay! Thanks. I'm so glad. I wasn't sure what, exactly, this fic was, even after I thought I'd finished it.

I think Tim would sort of delight in being teased by any of the Taylors, really.

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celtic_flicka August 11 2009, 03:04:21 UTC
So cute and funny! I loved them ragging on Tim, because it really clarifies the difference between that kind of teasing and the types of comments he probably got from his own parents.

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lindentree August 12 2009, 00:50:03 UTC
Okay, well, now I want to turn around and write some angsty fic about Tim's horrendous childhood. D:

Thank you for commenting! :)

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devilc August 11 2009, 18:56:00 UTC
You've got everybody's voices down pat.

And that line about sleeping on the pingpong table was made of win.

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lindentree August 12 2009, 00:51:03 UTC
Thank you so much!

Tami seemed so "Ugh" about Tim staying with them, I had take it to the "ew boys" place. :)

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bambiscott January 4 2011, 23:27:50 UTC
so like the characters

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lindentree January 7 2011, 05:57:11 UTC
Thank you!!! :)

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