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Friday Night Lights - "If This One Could Be With You", Tim/Julie, R

Jul 25, 2009 15:31

Title: If This One Could Be With You - Chapter 4/10
Author: lindentree
Rating: R (for the series; this part is just PG)
Character(s): Tim/Julie
Word Count: 3,743
Summary: After 2x11, "Jumping the Gun", Julie's parents come up with an appropriate punishment for her - tutoring Tim Riggins.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

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series: if this one could be with you, friday night lights, fic: mine, pairing: tim/julie

Comments 21

khemlab July 25 2009, 21:28:12 UTC

Okay, Tim telling Julie she's a 10? So not fair to try and kill me the weekend before the bar exam, lol. I literally was making the "Home Alone" face.

lindentree July 26 2009, 18:35:53 UTC

Hee! Sorry. I hope that was a Home Alone face of shock and not so much a Home Alone face of horror...

khemlab July 27 2009, 01:43:08 UTC

Oh, definitely more of the shock and surprise, lol. That was a nice scene. Also laughed about Julie telling Tim he had a drinking problem from the mouthwash in his glove compartment. Priceless.

lindentree July 27 2009, 05:07:42 UTC

I have to admit that I cribbed the mouthwash bit from an underage drinking incident in my own past. I think we thought we were sneaky.

sweetcakes983 July 26 2009, 00:48:22 UTC

Oh, man. Now we're really starting to get to the meat of the story! I love it. Keep it up. Is there anyway you can update with the next chapter in, oh, 5 minutes? Ha. Great work.

lindentree July 26 2009, 18:36:56 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it! More is coming very soon, I promise. I've kind of a crazy week ahead of me (I'm moving) but hopefully I'll be able to get the next chapter polished and ready to roll at some point. Thanks so much for commenting!

hope_guides_me July 26 2009, 02:43:42 UTC

I'm extremely anxious for the next chapter!

lindentree July 26 2009, 18:37:14 UTC

I'll try not to leave you hanging for too long! Thanks for commenting. :)

elzed July 26 2009, 03:19:23 UTC

This is utterly lovely and charming; and totally in character. Your Julie sounds perfect (and, oh, Tim Riggins, how can she even think of resisting... Sigh)

And the 10 conversation was brilliant.

lindentree July 26 2009, 18:38:40 UTC

Thank you so much! That's very kind of you. Glad you're enjoying it.

Yeah, I think resistance is most likely futile. I mean, it's Tim Riggins. Resistance is totally futile.

skeeta July 26 2009, 03:27:13 UTC

tim telling julie she's a 10 was perfection. can't wait for the next chapter - cant wait for the rating to finally kick over to R.

lindentree July 26 2009, 18:39:34 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for commenting. :)