FIC: The Children of Time Will Gather (4/6)

Aug 23, 2008 10:44

“Have you brought word from Him?  Or are you here to kill me?”

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martha jones, ianto jones, children of time, tenth doctor, jack harkness, fic

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CoT Part 4 mickeyk October 4 2008, 07:10:51 UTC
Jack is sure that there must be a fallacy in there somewhere, but religious debate is not his forte. He’d much rather do a problem in fifth-dimensional quantum geometry. In his head. While drunk.

Hee! Love this line. Ditto, this one:

Jack’s voice is quiet, but acidic enough to melt a Slitheen. Great description!

Jack can’t match the Doctor’s Oncoming Storm glare, but he can do a damn good imitation, with more a century of anger and violence to draw on.

Damn, poor Jack, makes me feel very badly for him along with how good his imitation would be.

In a way, I feel sorry for Chris Turner and what he's been through, but in a way I don't, that he's willing to let Donna die rather than tell Linton that he lied or something else. His new-found religious fervour scares me, especially since it's based on a fallible alien.

The bewilderment on Jack’s face quickly transforms into a smile. “The truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth!”

“He won’t believe me,” Turner objects. “He’ll think I’m barmy!”

Dr. Martha Jones (also known as the Messenger, the World-Walker, and the Bringer of Hope) grins. “Yep. He will.”

::runs to Part 5!::

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Re: CoT Part 4 lindenharp October 4 2008, 07:17:39 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Just remember: I'm not offering prizes for fastest read-through. :-)

And you can certainly feel sorry for Chris Turner. He's a broken personality -- a broken person -- trying to put himself together. And he's not willing to let Donna die. He has ever faith that the Lord Raphael will heal her mind.

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