Desperate for a beta reader before I post my first Blue Lincoln/Olivia amberverse fic.

Nov 20, 2011 13:39

So I'm new to LJ and new to this ship even though I have been hoping for it since episode 401.  The last episode was the kick in the pants I needed to finish this story and now I just want someone to read it and tell me I'm not crazy before I share it with the world.

Here is a little snippet:

When Lincoln stares at his ceiling that night he thinks of Olivia, the girl who eats choc peppermint ice-cream from the tub, perched on her kitchen bench and swinging her feet like a six year old and Olivia terrified, clutching his hand as some quasi chemical switch is thrown in her brain and she crosses universes with her mind, dragging him after her.

He doesn’t know whether to be disgusted with Nina Sharp or to thank her.

Any one up for it?  It's pretty long by my standards, 3000 words one shot.  Please tell me if I am posting in the wrong place, I haven't slept yet and I have no Idea what I am doing.

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