Fic: Hairline Fractures Final chapter

[limone1]

Title: Hairline Fractures 9

Disclaimer: Bones belongs to Fox, Hanson & Reichs

Rating: NC-17

Spoilers: Season 3 & 4

Summary: Brennan and Booth have been saying "I love you" for quite some time. It just took them a while to use the actual words.

Comments

[limone1]

Thank you ♥

That line is actually what started this fic, then I wrote the rest...

The one I'm writing now started with a smell. You never know what will inspire you! At least it's that way for me.

[sb158]

This was wonderfully written, and a very well-told story. It rings true to character, and some of your sentences are like poetry.

Loved it.

[limone1]

Really glad you like my fic and how I wrote it.

You never know if you'll get the characters right when you write something that would never happen on the show, pleased that worked for you too :)

[elena1701]

Wow, this is wonderful.

I like the way the first sentence of the first chapter is repeated towards the end of the chapter. And the final paragraph here is great!

Looking forward to the sequel to 'Moments', too.

[limone1]

Thank you :)

I repeated quite a few things in this fic on purpose. Pleased you think it worked. Also glad the final paragraph worked for you.

Thanks for your vote of confidence re Moments. Remains to be seen how it turns out, though!

[tempertemper]

OK so I've been back and read this all in one go and I am simply in ♥ with it.

I know I say this every time, but your economy with words and moments is breath taking.

And I adored this final chapter - Parker and that ROBOT - you are so clever to remember this. And drawing everything in to the title.

I am also ridiculously over excited that you are writing a sequel to moments! ♥ ya babe!

[limone1]

You went back read it all in one go, wow, that's the best compliment ever!

Yep, still being frugal with the words. Happy you think it works as it's always a balance not to leave too much out.

It was actually the part about the hairline fracture that gave me the idea to this fic. Then I wrote the rest ;) Wasn't very clever of me to remember the robot, my brain is basically made up of super glue, everything sticks.

Have fun watching the season premiere. I don't think I need to specify which show ;)

♥ back at ya!

[only_more_love]

I just want you to know that I read this and I worship it. I will be back with more specific comments because you, and this story, deserve them. <3 But right now I need a nap; Misha got up a couple times last night, and I think I might be getting sick.

Thank you for writing, my dear. You words are a pleasure and a balm.

[limone1]

Thank you my friend ♥

Don't worry about commenting, I know you've got a lot on your plate. It's enough for me to know that you like it, just read and enjoy.