Put my enemies to sleep (3/3)

Nov 20, 2008 02:55

Notes - Part One - Part Two - Part Three

3/3 )

brendon/ryan, nc-17

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vanitylove_xx November 20 2008, 23:55:23 UTC
Well, hello there person who I do not know but writes incredibly amazing fic. :D

Okay, so I've been sitting here for the past half hour trying to come with a half decent comment to leave, but reading this has robbed me of all coherent thought.

This was just beautiful, and I barely breathed while reading my way through this. I got so wrapped up in it! I felt so exhausted, right along with Brendon; everything that he went through, it was as though I was there with him for the ride. When Brendon was feeling confused, the scenes with Brent!

Now, knowing how it ends, I can go back and point out where exactly Tyler slowly started pushing Brent away from the group; how you can feel Brent's annoyance with Brendon right from there.

Tyler could have easily been a sort of comic-relief character, could have made this into a crack-fic of sorts, but instead, you made it feel so real and painful, and into something else entirely. Just ♥♥

Brendon and Ryan's relationship, how they come together at the end! And Tyler, how Tyler becomes his own person and the way the three of them connect! ♥ Tyler and Brendon having their own moment, and how despite Tyler being the one to hold Brendon's life together, he was still lost and also needed to be comforted~~

ahhh, i make no sense, but i'm excused! this was just incredible and lovely, and soooo amazing and wow. :DDD

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theaerosolkid November 30 2008, 01:07:00 UTC
Hello back! :)

Thank you so very, very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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