Present Progressive

[lilywhitelilith]

Title: Present Progressive
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: Ryan stops writing in online journals because he gets a real one.
Word Count: 10,136
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: Thanks to notshybutsly, jocondite, and castoffstarter for the terrific beta help.

For jzbell, happy graduation!

Comments

[jesikalovesyou]

you just made me cry.

like really cry.
tears, runny nose, choking, whimpering.

ahhhhhh...

wow. i think you fulfilled everything i have ever wanted in a fic ever. every-single-thing. this is absolutely my favorite fic ever ever ever ever.

first: the diary thing.
i mean, i love journals. i love empty notebooks that you can fill with your thoughts (or recounts of last night's sex). and ryan doing that in his journal, talking about everything he wanted from brendon was awesome.

second: kissing.
i love it when ryan and brendon just lay together and kiss. it's not like kinky or anything, it's just cute and... just cute. and i love it.

third: ryan fingering himself.
perhaps the hottest thing ever. him secretly doing it all the time and writing about it in his journal! *squee* amazing. and him loving it and imagining it happening when brendon blows him. i don't know why but guys fingering themselves just gets to me. and the vibrator part. 'cause you knows it's there tempting him. he just has to try it out. and that makes me squirm.

fourth (and best of all): fisting.
i am a HUGE sucker for fisting. to me, it's the sexiest thing that could ever ever happen ever. and ryan loving it? even hotter. like i almost shriveled up while i was reading it. oh my gosh. it is like my biggest kink out of them all.

fifth: brendonandryan.
how cute are they? very. and you wrote them so so good. how into his writing ryan is and how it helps him so much. and brendon's secretive writing because he wouldn't want to ruin his rep, right? 'cause he's not supposed to be the deep one here. and how everyone doesn't get ryan like brendon does with the journal thing.

it's just awesome. so awesome.
i have to save this onto my laptop just like all your other stories because you are THE BEST EVER and i love you. i really do.

[theaerosolkid]

Aaaw, man, thank you. That means so much to me, ti really does.

I'm so glad you liked this! Fisting is always kind of tough to write, so it makes me happy to hear that you liked it.

Thanks again for reading, and for the awesome feedback :)