Seasons' Greetings 2011 ♥ A Gift For fwittney

Dec 06, 2011 12:03

Title: An Injury
Author: brucethegirl
Recipient: fwittney
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1999
Warnings: none
Summary: The day before Christmas holidays doesn’t go according to anyone’s plan, especially when you’re trying to impress a prankster.

An Injury )

fest: seasons' greetings, submission: fic

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museme87 December 8 2011, 00:38:43 UTC
This was a really cute fic, C! I enjoy comedies-of-error a lot in fic, and this one is no exception. I've never really seen someone write Lily trying to impress James with a prank of her own, so that was a nice touch!

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brucethegirl December 10 2011, 08:23:32 UTC
Thank you! Yea, I saw the prompt and was trying to think of how to incorporate everything into a story, and I thought it would be the best way, especially since I'd also never seen anything like that. I'm so glad you liked it!!

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liebedance December 8 2011, 18:41:10 UTC
Oh, this was cute!!! :D

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brucethegirl December 10 2011, 08:18:42 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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zia_montrose December 9 2011, 18:51:44 UTC
I really like the misunderstanding of the strangling wreath and the off-the-page image I got of James trying to fight it off. The fact that he only found the card later? LOL.

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brucethegirl December 10 2011, 16:47:21 UTC
Thank you! I've always been a fan of off-the-page in those kind of situations. I'm so glad you liked it!

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glitterandsmut December 10 2011, 06:18:20 UTC
Ah, James, such a dunderhead. And those marauders, I loved how ridiculously obvious they were. Very well done!

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brucethegirl December 10 2011, 16:47:42 UTC
He really is in my mind. I'm so glad you liked it, thank you!

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fwittney December 11 2011, 02:15:08 UTC
I'm impressed, it had everything I asked in that prompt and it was done in such a creative way. I love it! specifically the James and Lily moments. Thank you so much! Your a brilliant writer!

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