Lily/James Games 2011 ♥ Expecto Patronum Round 2

Mar 27, 2011 17:04

Expecto Patronum

Round 2

Welcome to the second of our Lily/James Games Expecto Patronum Rounds! A few new things before the reiteration of the rules:
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Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 28 2011, 20:01:17 UTC
Title: Surprise
Author/Artist: perilousgard
Team: Stag
Rating & Warnings: G
Summary: Lily is surprised to find a certain someone in Madam Puddifoot’s.
Author's Note: It's 501 words. Hope that's okay. :) I really wanted to write more, too!

“Ah, there’s Madam Puddifoot’s. Want to go there, Lil?”

Lily frowned at the little tea shop, whose windows were plastered in every sort of Valentine’s Day decoration imaginable. She’d never once been curious about going inside it. The thought of being constantly showered in confetti by flying cherubs made her want to throw up a little.

“Er, not really, Euan.”

Her date nudged her playfully. “Aw, come on. It’s cold, and the Three Broomsticks is packed.”

And so Lily let Euan drag her into the stuffy tea shop, where garish shades of pink and red nearly made her eyes bleed. Momentarily blind, she allowed her date to pull her into a booth near the corner, and two menus were immediately dropped into their laps by a low-flying cherub. Lily glanced down at it.

“Suppose we should get that first date thing, eh?” Euan asked. “Pomegranate cakes. Sounds good.”

Lily’s lips quirked as she thought about the fact that the Persephone myth was about being kidnapped and raped by the Lord of the Underworld. How utterly romantic. “Sure, we can get whatever you want.”

They fell into an awkward silence and Lily took the time to look around the shop. There were a few couples in here that she recognized. Her friend Mary had somehow roped her boyfriend into coming; he looked quite uncomfortable, and was eyeing the cherubs as though he expected them to suddenly start pelting him with dungbombs. Lily’s eyes traveled.

Oh. Well, this was surprising to say the least.

James Potter was sitting across the small room, tucked cozily into a booth with a pretty blonde-haired girl that Lily recognized as Melissa Dunmore, a fellow sixth-year. Melissa played on the Gryffindor Quidditch team with James, but she had never expected to see them on a date together.

“What are you staring at?” Euan asked, and Lily blinked.

“Oh-nothing.” But he had already followed her line of sight.

“Yeah, funny about Potter and Dunmore, huh? He asked her out after a Quidditch practice, so I heard. They’re such good mates, but no one ever saw them as a couple.”

“Yeah,” said Lily, and she was surprised to hear that her voice sounded a bit hollow. She had not looked away from James and Melissa, who were sitting so close together they might have been joined at the hip. For some reason, the sight of them was annoying her. When had Potter decided he fancied Dunmore? She was all sporty and good at Quidditch like he was, but she was hardly his type.

And since when were you concerned about what his type was? She asked herself. When have you cared who he takes out?

I don’t, she answered herself, but then she saw Potter lean over and kiss his date, and Lily felt like she had been slapped in the face. He’s snogging her. So what do you care? You can’t stand the bloke, right?

I don’t care, she repeated to herself, but she knew that she did.

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard zia_montrose March 28 2011, 21:07:47 UTC
Oh, I do like jealous!Lily fics and this is such a nice take on one.

When have you cared who he takes out? ; )

Nice job, Team Stag!

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 28 2011, 22:38:41 UTC
Yay, thank you! :D

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard museme87 March 28 2011, 21:36:06 UTC
I also like jealous Lily. Jealous James appears more frequently, so it's nice to see the tables turned. :)

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 28 2011, 22:39:42 UTC
She's a lot of fun to write. I can't decide who's more fun- jealous James or jealous Lily. :)

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard beedaily March 28 2011, 22:19:00 UTC
I think this may be one of my favorites so far! Jealous!Lily who isn't whining and the whole thing very well written--can it be true? Yes! Huzzah for you! Plus, I'm a sucker for a good mythology reference. Nice work! =)

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 28 2011, 22:41:04 UTC
Thanks! Hehe, when I saw "Persephone Pomegranate Cakes" I really could not resist. I love mythology. :D

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard liebedance March 28 2011, 22:33:36 UTC
This was cute. I adored the Greek myths reference. And Lily's talking to herself was very amusing. Good job! Y_Y

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard missgoalie75 March 29 2011, 01:47:32 UTC
I will always enjoy Lily being jealous of one of James' dates/girlfriends and this was fabulous =)

Yay Team Stag!!

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 29 2011, 02:13:05 UTC
It is way, way too much fun. :D

Yay! Y_Y

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard sukebe_miroku March 29 2011, 04:02:07 UTC
Lily’s lips quirked as she thought about the fact that the Persephone myth was about being kidnapped and raped by the Lord of the Underworld. How utterly romantic.

I'm in love with you, you know. I'm going to buy us another pomogranate, and we will eat it over a Harry Potter movie when I visit. I freaking want to hug you now XD (I did a head-hits-the-desk thing)

And! I see why you mentioned what you mentioned~! :3 <3 <3 <3

Love you, sweetie~ <3

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 29 2011, 04:07:09 UTC
LOL your posts are always littered in <3s. It makes meh smile XD

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard sukebe_miroku March 29 2011, 04:11:25 UTC
<3 <3 <3

Well, you make me smile, love. ^^ <3 = my love for you and your fics xD

I'm also surprised you didn't catch my misspelled pomegranate. xD So now I might have a plan, dear~ <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard perilousgard March 29 2011, 04:22:03 UTC
OH HOW COULD I NOT CATCH THAT LOL.

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard sukebe_miroku March 29 2011, 04:27:43 UTC
I DON'T KNOW YOU GRAMMAR NAZI! I LOVE YOU <3 <3 <3

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Re: Stag- (FIC, G) Surprise by perilousgard marthemaria March 29 2011, 20:21:56 UTC
Oh, nicely done! I love a jealous Lily, it's a nice change. I really like that last line, the denial but knowing that you're in denial, which makes denying kind of pointless.

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