hehe, i like it. :) i got kinda excited when i saw the words "another whiskey tale;" i remembered reading the first one. think i still have it, actually... anyway, yeah, with the exception of some minor grammatical errors (which is never that huge a deal), i think it's great.
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i got kinda excited when i saw the words "another whiskey tale;" i remembered reading the first one. think i still have it, actually... anyway, yeah, with the exception of some minor grammatical errors (which is never that huge a deal), i think it's great.
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Girl (Jezebel Blake) crashes through his window and makes him follow her out by using her telekinetic powers
On second floor the big bad (Leslie Lancaster) fights Jezebel. Alan goes for help and finds her team mates.
Team mates follow Alan to help her because Alan uses his previously unknown powers of vocal modulation to convince people to do as he says.
Alan passes out during shadow porting.
Jezebel wakes him up in her team's home base. explains shit and welcomes him to the Psions.
The End.
Tada!
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