FIC: Naruto: Admiring with the Heart (3)

[lilpocketninja]

Title: Admiring with the Heart (3/12~)
Author: lilpocketninja / pocketnin / creamsoda
Rating: R
Warnings: Gore and the aftermath there of (CSI-level stuff); language; more plot than romance.
Pairings: Kakashi/Iruka (eventually)
Notes: I'm playing kind of fast and loose with the pre-manga timeline here, but then so does Kishimoto. ^^
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Comments

[daxzia]

Just skimming through and thought i would comment and tell you that this story is sounding better and better with each chapter. i can't wait to read the completed thing.

PS: fellow parrothead, eye. that's one of my favorite songs from Jimmy Buffett. along with "changes in latitude..."

[altealice]

Great job! Things are getting really good now. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[photoash]

Very interesting. I really like your style in this. I feel like I'm watching a drama series :D (like Lawn and Order SVU or something)

I wonder who has returned O_O oh my! Poor Iruka, hope he ends up ok! :D

[lilpocketninja]

I'm a huge CSI junkie, so that's where all this is coming from mostly. XD

DUN DUN DUN.

[_ofuda_]

Very happy to see this update! This is an excellent fic, I really like how you're portraying them both, and your plotline is awesome! Looking forward to how this progresses.

[vescas]

getting good! A secretly cool Iruka is always a nice thing XD Looking forward to more!