How about this line is beautiful? How it would feel to be stripped bare of the weight of expectation, and to just…breathe.
Annnd: She told everyone who would listen about how you stuck a stake through her heart, squished it under your foot and spat on it for good measure before sending her off to a life without you and your charming ways. Not in so many words of course, she wasn’t really intelligent enough for that.
Okay, I seriously love the storyline so far, but I'm already completely in love with your language and writing style: It was probably a testament to how drunk he was that he actually found YooChun’s suggestion reasonable.
I love how the wordiness always ties off in the end and it all makes sense. And the use of words is just gratifying <3 I miss reading fics like these ::cries:: This is the type of story and writing that makes me read every word, because every word has a purpose. I looooved it!!!!!
GAH!!!! <333 And I LOVE high school fics HAHAHA!!!! <33333333333!!!!! It's fun writing them, but writing them is not as
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Thanks so much for your encouragement!! It really means a lot to me, and I can't even tell you how happy I am that you like my wordiness, the way it's written XDDD. Many a would-be beta has given up on trying to shorten my sentences 8D.
AND GAH YOU'RE SO RIGHT!!! HIGHSCHOOL FICS ROCK!! Writing them is fun, but reading them rules all <3333.
And heeee, I shall definitely update within the next week ish - but you must update toooo, ya hear?? *squish* =DD
<333 Wordiness is nothing to be ashamed of, ne? ESPECIALLY when you can pull it off!!!!
Gah, that is probably why I do not have a beta. They try to change the WRITING STYLE. Which is not the purpose. I personally like unbetaed works, because it's how the author intended it to be <3.
^___^ I will be updating, you can count on that!!! AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF THIIIIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Same here!! I can never work with betas, although I do like having people around to bounce ideas off XDDD. And since I never took any formal grammar lessons or anything (they don't seem to have them in Australia!) they tend to frustrate me more with the 'oh you have to put the adverb behind this and this. *siggghhh XD.
We can live without 'em! =]
And yays!! That's seriously the best news I've heard all day ♥.
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How it would feel to be stripped bare of the weight of expectation, and to just…breathe.
Annnd:
She told everyone who would listen about how you stuck a stake through her heart, squished it under your foot and spat on it for good measure before sending her off to a life without you and your charming ways. Not in so many words of course, she wasn’t really intelligent enough for that.
Okay, I seriously love the storyline so far, but I'm already completely in love with your language and writing style:
It was probably a testament to how drunk he was that he actually found YooChun’s suggestion reasonable.
I love how the wordiness always ties off in the end and it all makes sense. And the use of words is just gratifying <3 I miss reading fics like these ::cries:: This is the type of story and writing that makes me read every word, because every word has a purpose. I looooved it!!!!!
GAH!!!! <333 And I LOVE high school fics HAHAHA!!!! <33333333333!!!!! It's fun writing them, but writing them is not as ( ... )
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where are YOUR updates? *puppy-dog eyes*
~small voice~ want mysteria... and he's all that...
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But Mysteria will show face on Thursday ^^ <333!!!
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promise??
cos i miss your fics! <33
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Soinlovewiththatstoryithurts!!! ♥
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ANDILOVEYOURSTORYTOBITSTOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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Eeeeeee *supermegaglompofdooooom!*
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I love your comment to bits!! ♥♥♥
Thanks so much for your encouragement!! It really means a lot to me, and I can't even tell you how happy I am that you like my wordiness, the way it's written XDDD. Many a would-be beta has given up on trying to shorten my sentences 8D.
AND GAH YOU'RE SO RIGHT!!! HIGHSCHOOL FICS ROCK!! Writing them is fun, but reading them rules all <3333.
And heeee, I shall definitely update within the next week ish - but you must update toooo, ya hear?? *squish* =DD
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Gah, that is probably why I do not have a beta. They try to change the WRITING STYLE. Which is not the purpose. I personally like unbetaed works, because it's how the author intended it to be <3.
^___^ I will be updating, you can count on that!!! AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF THIIIIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Same here!! I can never work with betas, although I do like having people around to bounce ideas off XDDD. And since I never took any formal grammar lessons or anything (they don't seem to have them in Australia!) they tend to frustrate me more with the 'oh you have to put the adverb behind this and this. *siggghhh XD.
We can live without 'em! =]
And yays!! That's seriously the best news I've heard all day ♥.
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I feel so loved!! ♥♥♥
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