SGA slash - McKay/Beckett - Damage (sequel to Scars)

[lillyjk]

Title: Damage - (Scars part 2)
Author: lillyjk
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing McKay/Beckett, implied McKay/???
Rating: NC-17
Word count: @ 2000
Spoilers: set immediately after The Hive
Warnings: If you’re here for my usual fic, this is probably not for you. Dark-fic. Abuse. Questionable consent. Bloodplay. Abuse of power. Features Evil!Carson.

Comments

[xanthe]

Ooh good! I'm so glad Rodney's found a better, hopefully kinder top! I love all the psychology stuff, even if the Carson is VERRRRRY dark indeed, but it's a fascinating study. I hate the way he manipulates and upsets Rodney but it's so well done it really draws you in.

Will there be a part 3 I wonder? Where we find out who put his mark on Rodney and what that means for evil!Carson? *g*

[lillyjk]

*rubs hands together*

to answer your questions - Yes and yes.

also, I'm working on the hurt/comfort fic I'd mentioned before...but I think it's going to end up Rodney/Ronon/John. *sigh*

and I'm eagerly awaiting the G&DS prequel

[xanthe]

Ooh yay to part 3!!! I'm looking forward to it!

I'm always up for some good, Rodney focussed h/c although I admit I like McShep or McBeck or McSheppett best...

G&DS prequel is coming along and I'm having a lot of fun with it - it's very long as so often happens *g*.

[lillyjk]

SQUEE! I can't wait!

[iadorespike]

Very intense. Carson was extremely dark and creepy here-I was worried for Rodney. I was relieved when he stood up for himself, after a fashion. So...not pleasant, but I did think it was well done. *nods* Thanks. *g*

Just a couple of little things, if no one has said...
He likes to cut just as the moment of orgasm I think you wanted 'at' here. And:
There’s a bite mark centered on once curved cheek of Rodney’s ass I think you meant 'one'?

[lillyjk]

ACK! thanks, I had it betaed but then I changed some thing - totally missed those. thanks babe. glad creepy Carson is working for you.

[iadorespike]

No problem. :)

I'd really like to add that there needs to be another piece, and John really wants to be included. He'll be a much kinder top for Rodney, and he said he left that mark in a very loving way. *nods firmly*

See the icon? It's all good. *g*

*hugs you*

[mckayfan]

Wow love the end the bite mark could be from anyone but my guess is Ford but it could also be Ronon or John which could mean trouble for carson.
Is this the end?

[lillyjk]

there will be at least one more installment. glad you've enjoyed Evil!Carson

ooh ooh!

[vampiegirl]

Smirks!

You're just simply evil!

I'm weirdly liking your Cvil!Carson

more like now!!!!

Re: ooh ooh!

[lillyjk]

*cackles* evil!Carson rocks my socks. he's suprisingly easy to write too.

[mousewrites]

Oh my GOD.

This... wow. Dark and hot and amazing! WOW...

I followed the rec from the_index. It's SO in the archive. My GOD...

:: goes to read it again.::