Comments | lillyg: Fic: Plan B, Spike, Withheld, PG, Flashpoint

lillyg

Fic: Plan B, Spike, Withheld, PG, Flashpoint

Jun 05, 2009 19:24

Title: Plan B
Author: lillyg
Characters: Spike
Word Count: 500 (depends on the version of office)
Prompt: Monthiversary prompt Friendship
Rating: PG
Summary: Spike want to rest, but the rest of he world doesn't.
Disclaimer: Don't own anything apart from my Spike fantasies...
Betas: The wonderful
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Comments 13

iniq June 5 2009, 17:49:17 UTC

XD

Poor Spike. No respite for him. *g*

Also: Lewis~ ♥!

lillyg June 5 2009, 17:52:52 UTC

Thanks for reviewing! I was sure you would like the fact that I included Lewis! Did you read the previous part first?

iniq June 5 2009, 18:14:53 UTC

I just saw that there is one!
*clicks*

paranoid_woman June 5 2009, 18:00:08 UTC

I really love how you describe all the possilibities here and how you show the way Spike sees the other characters!

The best part was Lou telling Spike about his new neighbor... Poor Spike!! XD

Great job!

lillyg June 5 2009, 18:02:46 UTC

Yeah, Spike is cursed :p

I'm glad you liked the way I described the team through Spike eyes!

paranoid_woman June 5 2009, 18:10:58 UTC

It was a great story. You described everyone so well! *g*

eviltwin June 5 2009, 18:55:33 UTC

LOL, oh no! Poor Spike! I love the way you had him go through all the possibilities and showed what kind of a guy he is from the way he makes his decision. (For some reason I do like the part about Greg, and that Spike doesn't think that they're close enough for him to go there, despite the closeness of the team.)

I'm sure Lou's neighbour can't play ALL day ;)

~hugs~ Nice conclusion, hon!

lillyg June 5 2009, 20:24:46 UTC

I'm glad you like the way he chose...

Trust me... Some people CAN do noise all the day, my neighbors for example... the kids can run for 4 hours in a row at least! One day I just snapped and went to yell on them.

eviltwin June 5 2009, 20:30:13 UTC

Ugh, kids are so damn inconsiderate sometimes. :|

I do like his choice!

I wish I could write again. I've really sucked this week.

lillyg June 5 2009, 20:32:15 UTC

It's not the kids that are inconsiderate, they are 2 and 5, the problem = the stupid no-brainer parents...

Too bad for the lacck of inspiration, I've had just this one or 2 weeks at least, so I understand...

shanachie_quill June 14 2009, 01:08:28 UTC

Poor Spike. I really think he would have more luck at your place! ;-)

lillyg June 14 2009, 01:09:29 UTC

With my neighbor, their kids, and the workmen in front of my room! I don't think so!!!!

shanachie_quill June 14 2009, 02:03:53 UTC

Kids are evil! Yes but there would be other perks ;-)