Jade Chapter 16

[lilly0]

Title: Jade: Chapter 16 (of 18)
Pairing: Akame. RyoxJin as brothers (not as a pairing). Various other characters.
Rating: PG-13 (for this chapter)
Genre: AU, crime, romance, family
Multi-chapter
Disclaimer: I don't own them or anything else JE-related. But the story is mine of course^^
Summary: Tokyo, 1981: A young bride disappears, leaving no trace but

Comments

[lilly0]

SPOT for yukitsubute

[yukitsubute]

Oh god, where shall I start

[lilly0]

Thanks for your awesome comment, dear!! *huggles*
Well, we already talked about this chapter ^^

Yes, Jin is Ryo's father. Quite a twist, right? O_O
Now Ryo has to adapt to this new situation... poor kid ><

Kame is great, right? Well, maybe they had already so much shi* going on between them that this thing isn't all that difficult for him? Like: Oh, alright, Ryo is Jin's son. Okay... :D
Okay, it's not that simple of course, but...

Well, we'll see ^^

Yes, Kame and Jin are in a tough situation now... really >< Poor them.

Thanks so much for reading,dear!! <3

[lilly0]

SPOT for mari02

[mari02]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i freaking didn't see this coming what the omg i'm speechless i haven't read the whole thing yet but omg

[mari02]

i feel dizzy this is very unexpected omg. i remember thinking about the same thing for 1 second and i didn't consider it. omg omg i am still in shock why are you doing this to me i cannot wait for another week to get to know what happens next :((

[mari02]

Honey you are insane why are you doing this to me. this is really a shock I can’t even. I swear it was a thought that I was laughing off what the hell. I’m sorry I don’t think my thoughts will be as organized as the others when I write this comment but I want you to know asap how I feel about this okay

[lilly0]

SPOT for sweetspicyhot

[sweetspicyhot]

Hello :D. I also was shocked when i read that Jin is Ryo's father. But like everything else for me it fits naturally within the story once i think about it a little. It makes the conflicts between Jin and Ryo even more poignant because when i look back he has acted more like a concerned father than a brother. Great twist.

Have I told you that I love these little rainclouds of yours--because i do.

Ryo, I feel so sorry for him, but I also feel he is strong, so strong and i think once they get beyond the danger. He and Jin will be able to relate to one another properly.

Kame and Yuu are fast to catch that guy but I am a little nervous because they have Ryo and want Kame.

On to the next--if this were a novel they would call it a page turner ne.

Hugs, hearts, and a nice rest.:D:D:D<3<3<3

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for your awesome comment, my friend!! <3

I was a bit surprised that it really came as such a shock that Ryo is Jin's son ^^
Well, it always makes a difference if you write or read something, right? :D

But you are right, the conflicts between Ryo and Jin can be seen in a totally different light now. It's the reason why Jin was always so overprotective towards Ryo. He felt more like a father than a brother.

You like my rainclouds? :D YAY! <3

Thanks so much for reading <3

[romapi]

thanks for the update lilly

[lilly0]

Thanks so much for reading, dear! <3

[jorian1108]

I KNEW THAT, didn't I???? I wrote that before!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaa, still can't believe - I thought I was going crazy, even thinking of that possibility, lol But I KNEW Jin is Ryo's father!!! *sits and crosses her arms with satisfaction*.

But who on earth kidnapped this poor kid and why? And why they want Kame??? OMG - this is becoming more and more twisted! And was that woman in the hospital Jade??? Is she finally Kame's mother or not???

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdateeeeeeeeeee soooooooon pliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiz!!!!!

[lilly0]

I know!!!! I was so shocked when I read your comment last time. Like: Oh no... how did she guess it!? :D But as it was only a loose guess, I didn't freak out about it ^^

I promise you, a lot of things will be clearer with next chapter. ^^

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! *huggles*

[jorian1108]

And only two chapters to go ;-( I hope they will be looooong ones!!! :) I love that story so much ;-)