46. Fanfiction: Remiss Redemption

[liliths_requiem]

Title: Remiss Redemption
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Molly Weasley, Bellatrix Black
Pairings: Molly Weasley/Bellatrix Black
Era: up to and including the Second War
Word Count: 766
Prompt: 100quills 31. Forgiveness

Comments

[zofbadfaith]

That was beautiful... in a very, very sad way.
You always do a marvelous job with those two :)

[liliths_requiem]

Thanks hon, I'm glad you liked it.

They're my babies, I try very hard to give them my best.

[kiskafalair]

Heeeeeeeeeee~

How do you keep thinking up all these scenarios without breaking canon?

and the Avada Kedavra green of Molly’s glowing eyes.

Pretty pretty pretty! As always, your story has made me pity Bella and Molly more then I ever thought possible. I adore the little tiny tid bits you put in the story that aren't necessary, but they make the entire thing so much more believable. Like how 'she was wearing a magical mask brewed from the hair of Bella’s last murder' instead of just "she wore a disguise of a woman with blonde hair and green eyes' etc.

And then, of course, the ending. giggling almost in a way that makes the insanity in her eyes look innocent. And Molly trying to brush it off as a joke - it was just so tragic. Your version of Bella is so...she's almost innocent. It's like she has this big scary mask on, when in reality she's a kid that just wants to be held.

I'm keeping my eyes wide open for more from you. I was super sick today (stupid 24 hour viruses) but this definately helped my spirits lighten.

[liliths_requiem]

Aw, I love your reviews, they always make me smile.

I think it's important to remember that Bella was only thirty when she was locked away for life, and most of her teenage years were spent being loyal to a madman. Her innocence, therefore, became a little skewed.

I'm sorry you're sick, I am too. But I'm glad this perked you up.

[morte206]

i must say that I never imagined these two together till I first read your fics. You make me believe it. You make me feel the heartache, the melancholy , the love and passion however inexplicable.

Thank you for sharing.

[liliths_requiem]

Thank you for reading.

I really don't see them as inexlpicable. There was something there, we know that from the books, I just made it love instead of hate.

[morte206]

You are of course correct the books do hint at a relationship / family history between Molly and Bellatrix and that relationship is a hateful one. Hate that is explicable, more often than not hate is. Love though, love will always remain one of the great mysteries of life. Love is a dichotomy both inexplicable and explicable at the same time. As an example I offer this: How many times have you wondered what is it that a friend sees in their chosen partner. You can understand why they are friends, you can see it in their interactions and yet you just can't quite fathom what your friend sees in that person.

At any rate I am babbling.

Take care, keep writing and I shall keep reading.

[arobynsung]

Heartbreaking but as always, beautiful.

[liliths_requiem]

Thanks love, I'm trying to write something happy but regardless as to how happy I am my writing refuses to enter the fluff genre.

[arobynsung]

Well you write angst wonderfully, so it'll be no hardship to stay where you are.

[traces_of_being]

I love this so god damn much! You give these woman your best, trust me!! Those last few lines are by far my favourite of your series. Thank you for this. *tear tear*

[liliths_requiem]

thanks. I plan on writing a fic around those lines, and more of them in school. So hopefully there'll be more soon.

[traces_of_being]

Awesome!! I am all anticipation! I shall post my Molly/Bella fic soon. dum dum dumm