dun dun dun dun... more on "Dragon Dreams"

[lilian_cho]

Dear Body,

I know you're overdue for a sick leave since June, but must you invite multiple sicknesses at the same time?
First there was the cracked molar, then there's the sore throat and persistent cold. Must you add nosebleed to the mix?
And while I'm at it, please to be losing those four kilos of extra baggage.
That is all.

Brain

You all

Comments

[aldebaran1977]

As I`m not sure where you want to go with the story, I can only suggest probably completely inappropriate titles like "But A Dream Within A Dream" or "Dreams Are My Reality" ;-) . Perhaps "Captivating A Dream" or "A Living Dream" or "There Is No Such Thing As A Happily Ever After, Prince Charming".

I`m completely uncreative, but well, so was everyone else ;-)

[lilian_cho]

Thank you! :-D

What about "Dreams Captive" or "Dream Lives"?

Now you'll regret commenting, because I friended you back and now demand more input :-P

I'm going to assume that you've read "Dragon Dreams"--yes?
If not, it's here.

If you've read it and don't mind reading spoilers, here's a v. v. spoilery sequel plan I wrote.

[aldebaran1977]

Yes, I read (most of) it. Just skipped a few parts *ducks* And read your expose for the sequel, too.

I don`t like two nouns in a title all that much usually. I`d rather choose something like "Captivated While Dreaming" or "Captivated In Dreams".

For something completely different I just thought about "(Bound To or Visiting or Hiding With) Death`s Little Brother" or just something like "Getting Real".

Now that you asked for my input, you have to live with it ;-)

But I`m still happy to be your friend. Really. ;-)

sequel's title

[lilian_cho]

lol it's okay. I skip parts when reading fanfics too :-P (Even books, most of the time) The only time I don't skip parts is for my Literature classes and other textbooks.

I know the beginning of "Dragon Dreams" is slow, but I really don't know how to fix it >_> *was too tired after the major rehaul from the original 2000-word version*

I don`t like two nouns in a title all that much usually.

Ah, any particular reason why? The reason I prefer two words in the title is to parallel "Dragon Dreams."
Plus I love double meaning--> "Dragon Dreams" can mean either dreams about dragons or a dragon that dreams.
"Dreams Captive" can mean:
1. Dream (Morpheus)'s captive (i.e., Draco)
2. ...Hmmm, actually that should be "Dreams Captivate" or "Dreams Capture," huh. *ponders*

For something completely different I just thought about "(Bound To or Visiting or Hiding With) Death`s Little Brother"

X-D

Parentheses might work. I'd have to think on this some more...

Now that you asked for my input, you have to live with it ;-)*g* Noted. It amuses

[aldebaran1977]

Oh, and after scanning the other comments: How about "Waking Up The Dragon"? or "Waking Up A Sleeping Dragon"?