Comments | lilian_cho: "Twenty Things about Scorpius Severus Malfoy" (Gen, PG-13)

lilian_cho

"Twenty Things about Scorpius Severus Malfoy" (Gen, PG-13)

Dec 01, 2007 01:24

I can haz AS/S ship?
Written in a fit of inspiration after I speculated about who Draco’s wife might be. Will be expanded into a fic later, starting from the boys' fifth year. (If anyone’s interested to co-write or write about the boys' earlier years, drop me a line!) Please point out any mistakes.

"Twenty Things about Scorpius Severus Malfoy" ( Read more... )

one-shot, s.s.m., .♥scorpius, fanfiction, chinese, :♥slytherins, .♥draco, list_fic, :♥albus severus

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shadesofsienna December 1 2007, 10:17:09 UTC

Asdfgsd. That's adorable. *loves*

lilian_cho December 1 2007, 10:56:31 UTC

Hee :-D

*loves back*

20 Things about Al lilian_cho December 11 2007, 02:09:18 UTC

Here's Albus' 20 Things!

Also, I will try to do that whole Scribblit thing over again. See what happens.

monzz December 2 2007, 00:01:59 UTC

*pops in from her perma-lurk status*

Aww, I love this... your Scorpius and Al are just so cute. :)

lilian_cho December 2 2007, 00:03:15 UTC

Yay, thanks! :-D

I'll be writing a companion "Twenty Things about Albus Severus Potter" shortly.

How are you? :-)

monzz December 2 2007, 05:26:05 UTC

Ooh... I'll be looking forward to it. :)

I'm doing great, the changes in LJ have scared me away a little but I still follow my flist as always. I've finally got a personal blog on another site, which has kept me busy. But I don't want to mix the two journals- it's clear LJ doesn't need any more attention drawn to all the fandom smut on here. :P

lilian_cho December 2 2007, 10:09:25 UTC

Am working on it, but it's not as easy as Score's.

Yeah...it /is/ scary. And annoying.

lol, I keep my rl and fandom blogs separate too. Difference is, I hardly update the rl one X-D

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lilian_cho December 2 2007, 01:28:55 UTC

Thankee :-D

I love being able to make up anything about Scorpius >=D

gelsey December 2 2007, 01:45:54 UTC

Score never told her that he would rather she brought Jade instead. I think "bring" might be better than "brought." However, I'm not absolutely sure that it's correct that way.

Giddy after Al’s seventeenth birthday party, Score and Al sneaked off to the magical part of Chinatown to see the night market snuck, not sneaked, I think.

Since the first day of school, Al moped about complaining that Score spent all his spare time with Rose. ... about, complaining ...

When Jade pointed out at dinner that he was neglecting Al, Score snapped. “We see each other in classes and at meals all the time! What more does he want? Share my room?” comma, not period, after snapped. And it might make more sense to have "To share my room?" though that's a matter of opinion, I think.

A very cute piece! I like it a lot. <3

lilian_cho December 2 2007, 02:05:14 UTC

snuck = sneaked, according to this.

Fixed! Thanks a lot :-D
Glad you like it, will be writing "Twenty Things about Albus Severus Potter" next.

gelsey December 2 2007, 02:14:33 UTC

Hmm, that works. I guess I'm just used to hearing snuck. I wonder if it's a regional/continental thing or just personal preference ... *ponders*

No problem, happy to help.

Look forward to seeing it.

lilian_cho December 2 2007, 02:20:39 UTC

I've only encountered "snuck" on paper, but always hear "sneaked." So yeah, probably a regional thing.

aldebaran1977 December 2 2007, 02:35:14 UTC

So cute! Looking forward to Al`s Version of the events!

lilian_cho December 2 2007, 10:08:15 UTC

Thanks! :-D
Am working on it, but it's not as easy as Score's.