Nov 03, 2005 17:01
When Cinderelly’s father had past away she was very sad and lonely, so I Jack and the other mice befriended her. Cinderelly’s evil step mother and step sisters were very cruel to her, making her do all the chores all by herself.
One day, while Cinderelly was washing the floor, the door bell rang. There was a messenger at the door with an invitation to the prince’s ball. Every maiden in every household was able to go. Cinderelly looked so happy, knowing that she was able to go when her step mother said she could if she finished all the chores and if she could find something suitable to wear.
Cinderelly was so excited that she ran all the way up stairs into her room and pulled out her mother’s old dress. Then all you could her was, “CINDERELLA,” yelled by her sisters. “Oh well,” Cinderelly said, “I guess my dress have to wait.” Cinderelly looked at her dress, and then walked out of her room to go see what her step sisters wanted. “Poor Cinderelly,” I said.
(Girl mouse)”Hey we can do it! We can do it, we can do it, we can help our Cinderelly, we can make you dress so pretty, there’s nothing to it really. (Gus)I’ll cut it with the scissors, (Jack) and I can do the sewing, (Girl) leave the sewing to the women you go get the trimming.
I and Gus went downstairs to find something’s for Cinderelly’s dress. When we went to a room, we saw some pearls and pink ribbon. We started going to go get it but we stopped dead in our tracks when we saw Lucifer. So we tipped toes to the ribbon and pearls and as we were starting to go back, Lucifer woke up. We tried to hurry back to the hole but the pearls broke, we tried to pick them up as fast as we could, then we saw that we lost the pink ribbon and of course it was by Lucifer.
Lucifer knew we wanted it, so he sat on it. So me and Gus split up, I went by the clothes on the other side to get some buttons and Gus stayed where he was just in case Lucifer moves. After a while Lucifer came after me and I got him tangled up in the clothes while Gus got the ribbon and ran back. I did the same after making sure that Lucifer was tangled up good.
When Cinderelly walked into her room after she told her step mother and step sisters that she was not really and couldn’t go, the lights slowly turned on while the closet door opened revealing the dress that we made for her. “Surprise, surprise,” we all said. She was so happy; she quickly put it on and ran downstairs.
“Wait, wait, wait for me!” She got at the bottom and they all just looked at her. “Don’t you like it?” Cinderelly said. “Yes, don’t you?” her step mother said looking at her daughters. Then they realized that she was wearing their things that they threw away.
They went crazy on her, pulling things off, just tearing up her dress. “Girls, girls, come on now, we’re going to be late,” Her mother said. So they left, leaving Cinderelly behind. Cinderelly ran out into the back yard bawling her eyes out. Poor Cinderelly.
All of a sudden there was this bright light coming out of nowhere. When the light was gone there was a lady, Cinderelly’s fairy god mother. She was talking to Cinderelly then all of a sudden she was saying all this weird words, turning a pumpkin into a carriage, and turning poor Bruno into a door man. We tried to run but it didn’t work, me Gus and two other mice were turn into horses, HORSES, come on, why were we turned into horses, oh my gosh.
Anyways, of course the horse was turned into the driver, and then it was Cinderelly’s turn. The fairy god mother said some more weird words and pointed her wand at Cinderelly. When she was done, Cinderelly looked so pretty in her shiny blue dress with her glass slippers. “Now you only have until the stroke of midnight until everything things turns back and you’re back in rags,” said the fairy god mother. So Cinderelly jumped into the carriage and off we went to the ball.
When we got there Cinderelly hurried up to the castle. It was a while until we saw here running out as fast as she could. On here way to the carriage she lost a glass slipper, she had no time to go back for it so she just left it. We raced back home and just before we got there everything started changing back to normal, except one thing…..the glass slipper.
The next day Cinderelly was so happy that she was humming the same tune that was playing when she was dancing with the prince. The step mother got curious, and when the king’s chair man came to check every maiden in every household to see if their foot fitted in the glass slipper, she locked Cinderelly up in her room.
Cinderelly tried to get out but it was no use, so me and Gus went looking for the key which was in her step mothers pocket. We went down stairs were the step sisters were trying the slipper on, making their foot fit in it but not succeeding. We climbed the table that the step mother was by, and tried to go inside her pocket and get the key. It took us a while but we finally got it and climbed all the way up back to Cinderelly’s room. Cinderelly ran down stairs when she got out yelling, “Wait, wait, wait for me!”
The chair man was walking towards Cinderelly to let her try on the shoe, but her step mother tripped him, making him fall and break the glass slipper. Of course Cinderelly had the other one and pulled it out showing the chair man. She put the slipper on, perfect fit.
Soon afterwards she and Prince Charming were married. And they lived happily ever after…..so far!