"Paradise Circus" (Caroline, Klaus) PG-13 (Part III of V)

Feb 24, 2012 21:57

Title: “Paradise Circus”
Author: Lila
Rating: PG-13
Character/Pairing: Caroline, Klaus
Spoiler: “All My Children”
Length: Part III of V
Summary: Klaus takes Caroline on a trip, but he’s the one to see the world.
Disclaimer: Not mine, just borrowing them for a few paragraphs.

Parts I & II are here:

…it’s unfortunate that when we feel a storm we can roll ourselves over ‘cause we’re uncomfortable... )

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worldwasasong February 29 2012, 17:03:21 UTC
Dear Lila,
I'm loving this story so much. Of course I am because you're the writer -- I have fond fic memories from VM, GG, etc. :). I can't wait to find out what happens next to Caroline and Klaus here, so I'm reloading a lot, lol. The slow build-up between them makes me happy. I'm glad you're not taking the easy way out and having her just fall for Klaus. It's realistic that she'd still be into Tyler and torn between him and this new world. Klaus is so in-character too, with his tension, anger, and threats of violence. The little moments of peace between them mean more contrasted with Klaus' tougher side. Great fic so far.

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lila82 March 1 2012, 02:26:40 UTC
I'm loving this story so much. Of course I am because you're the writer -- I have fond fic memories from VM, GG, etc. :).

Thank you so much! What a lovely compliment.

I can't wait to find out what happens next to Caroline and Klaus here, so I'm reloading a lot, lol.

New chapter was just posted. Enjoy!

The slow build-up between them makes me happy. I'm glad you're not taking the easy way out and having her just fall for Klaus. It's realistic that she'd still be into Tyler and torn between him and this new world. Klaus is so in-character too, with his tension, anger, and threats of violence. The little moments of peace between them mean more contrasted with Klaus' tougher side.Pretty much the only thing I'm requiring of myself in this fic is a slow build to something more. It would be completely out of character for Caroline to fall head over heels without some real introspection on her own part and growth on his. Still, I do worry about woobiefying him and I'm doing my very best to keep him a bit menacing, but also accessible ( ... )

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