Comments | liketheriverrun: Gift Horse (Part 2)

liketheriverrun

Gift Horse (Part 2)

Apr 05, 2007 15:15

The gate was less than a two-minute flight from the settlement and Sheppard was doing everything in his power to cut the trip down to a minute and a half, otherwise the Satedan was going to bleed out on the floor of the Jumper before they ever got him to the infirmary.

“Ronon, look at me,” Teyla was calling from his side as Rodney fought to stop ( Read more... )

stargate atlantis, john sheppard, slash, fanfiction, rodney mckay

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Fleece anonymous April 6 2007, 00:03:18 UTC

Wow. Your friend was right. Fuzzy. Warm and fuzzy. It was like being wrapped in a fleece throw! The misunderstanding--the he thought, but he thought. At crosspurposes and yet they end up right where they were meant to be. The lighting thing was so well done. In any lighting, Rodney's eyes-- That was brilliantly done. The entire story was warm and sweet.

Cheers!

Re: Fleece liketheriverrun April 8 2007, 04:58:14 UTC

Thanks so much. Warm fleece throws are always welcome!

grey853 April 6 2007, 00:42:32 UTC

I enjoyed the story. I especially liked how they keep dating because they never can seem to get any alone time. *g* Sneaky.

liketheriverrun April 8 2007, 04:59:20 UTC

Well you have to do what you have to do... even dating :-) Thanks so much for the feedback, so glad you enjoyed the fic!

*loves* krysalys April 6 2007, 00:46:50 UTC

Oh thank heavens you've got your own LJ. YAY! *happy Snoopy dance*
The run-on sentences threw me off just the teensiest bit (I do get that they were representative of John's thoughts, though), but otherwise...
*drools copiously*
Wonderful job, love.
More more more! *claps*
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Re: *loves* liketheriverrun April 8 2007, 05:00:41 UTC

Howdy! Good to see you over in my little hideout! So glad you could join me and thanks so much for the feedback. I'm so happy you liked the fic!

liresius April 6 2007, 01:07:42 UTC

Sweet story! I was waiting for the confusion with Dr Rhymes to come back in. Happy, the way it worked out.

liketheriverrun April 8 2007, 05:01:32 UTC

Thanks so much! And I'm always happy when the boys end up together *G*

seperis April 6 2007, 01:13:48 UTC

Oh that was warm fuzzy happiness times ten! Loved.

And gift horse is really appropriate.

liketheriverrun April 8 2007, 05:03:02 UTC

Thanks! And,yeah, that's what I was going for, that feeling of not knowing what a great thing you got, even when you weren't expecting it or looking for it... a gift horse. So glad you enjoyed it!