Title: Untitled

[likestowrite]

Title: Untitled
Author: likestowrite
Pairing:  Ianto/Jack
Spoilers: None
Rating: 18
Summary: A half-serious (and first) attempt at a love scene between Ianto & Jack
Disclaimer: No copy right intended. I have no financial gain from this, it's just a bit of fun. Characters belong to R.TD

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Jack kneeled at the bottom of their bed. Ianto was already in it,

Comments

[phantomreviewer]

Could you stick this behind a cut please,
Just cause being only 14 I don't want to have to read this going though my 'Friends Page' Cause I'm all innocent and the like (bloff16 would be laughing her head off here)
Okay that's a lie, I would have probarlly read it but I would like if something's over an 18 it to be behind a cut.
Sorry to be a pain.

phantom

P.s. It's very good, (Alright I did read it) it is good though

[phantomreviewer]

Thanks!

[haces222]

Ye Gods for your first attempt that was absolutely fantastic, I'm now just a pile of goo

[likestowrite]

what can i say i was bored with too much time on my hands. I'm glad it was "goo" inducing for you. (not meant as a euphamism by the way)

[jordle]

Aww they're snuggling! Yay.

Another great fic :)

[mandy_mck]

:-O. You've left me speechless...

Now coherant thoughts are back. Was wonderful, Jack can wake me up anyday :D.
One thing: "and whipping his hand on the" = wiping?
and minorly "eyeing Ianto foot which was barely covered" = Ianto's?

Me being picky, sorry. But absolutly amazing. *goes to read again...* xxx

[wscaster]

that's a first attempt? wow very hot!

[wscaster]

some of the hottest and subsequently best Iato/Jack love/sex scene fic written are by women so i thought I'd try my hand (so to speak) at writing one to show that men are capable if they try. thats not to say the ones written by men are bad by no means...i'm rambling now as to not cause offence and i dont know why i generally don't bother

[likestowrite]

goddamn it i did it again. i should check im logged in before i reply