the night starts here (4/?), will/skandar/anna, nc-17
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YAY.
Title: the night starts here (4/?)
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Will/Skandar/Anna. In this part, mostly Skandar/Anna.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Real people. Slash and het.
Summary: Skandar's not quite sure why, but it still seems completely new to him to be attracted to Anna. He knows he probably has been in a kind of vague, non-addressed ( Read more... )
YAY.
Title: the night starts here (4/?)
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Will/Skandar/Anna. In this part, mostly Skandar/Anna.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Real people. Slash and het.
Summary: Skandar's not quite sure why, but it still seems completely new to him to be attracted to Anna. He knows he probably has been in a kind of vague, non-addressed ( Read more... )
SQUUUEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! SKANDAR/ANNA!!!! AND ICE CUBES!!!
I anticipated this pair the whole time and finally! Oh, the tension in the previous chapters had already been so sensual, due to the fact that Anna is Skandar's equal rival, makes Skandar's ardor towards her that special so that his acceptance of his feelings towards her is the highlight of their relationship. IT JUST MELTED ME!
I adored the way he got attracted and distracted by Anna, and I loved that everything is so natural for him. Though, Anna just have to think everything over (they could have just taken a shower after that, you know!), ah but that is exactly what makes this much more exciting.
Speaking of exciting: BEN!!!! That's all I want to say about that :D
I also enjoyed the Will/Skandar bits that gave a little of what might come in the next chapters. Skandar acted rather cute at Will's suggestion, it's pretty similar to his disapproval of Anna - which occurs to me that he always first oppose the things he wants most? Another reason why I like your Skandar/Anna.
Oh and you are so evil! Oh geez, talk about a life-worth's torment:
"DON'T SAY ANYTHING ELSE," Skandar shouts, "OR WE WILL NEVER HAVE SEX AGAIN, BECAUSE I WILL KILL YOU."
*ROFL*
I expected you to have had troubles writing this pair, but honestly I think you mastered it. Though, I know that your uppermost challenge will be the Will/Anna pairing. All I can say to you about that matter is: Do not forget that the readers themselves have their own struggles here too. Not all of them are accustomed to M/M pairing or even M/F. It only comes as an option to them if their own ship is involved in it. But first you will be needing an author who has the courage to write it ;)
So I assure you, that whatever struggles you will have in the next chapters *pats you hand*, it will be worth it.
*throws you little red hearts*
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You know, I really did debate about putting this much emphasis on the Skandar/Anna (I wondered if I was just getting all focused on the HOTNESS of it and not paying much attention to anything else, haha) but in the end I decided it worked because there has been so much tension surrounding it in the previous parts. It's true what you said about the equal rival thing, and I'm glad that came across!!
which occurs to me that he always first oppose the things he wants most?
Yeah! That does tend to be how I write him. Like he has all these reasons why he feels like he shouldn't want to do something, even though secretly he does. I.E. Anna is his rival, he's meant to hate her because Will likes her and he likes Will etc.
LOLOL I KNOW, I am so cruel to Skandar!! *pets him* I love him really, honest. But yeah, he's definitely gonna be carrying condoms around with him 24/7 now. XD
Yeah, the Will/Anna is going to be the biggest struggle for me. I get what you mean about the readers having similar struggles accepting the different pairings too and I think that helps a lot in a way...knowing that, say, Will/Anna shippers have accepted Will/Skandar.
ANYWAY, seriously, I appreciate this comment SO MUCH, the support means so much to me and I'm so glad you're enjoying my writing so much. ♥
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