narnia kink meme part #3

Dec 28, 2010 22:13

So with the approval/permission/support of the lovely suborbital, I have decided to start a...

NARNIA KINK MEME PART #3.
(anonymity optional!)

Both FPF and RPF are welcome. Het, slash, femslash - anything and everything. XDBasically, this is how it works: you comment with something kinky you've always wanted to read in the Narnia fandom. Anything goes, ( Read more... )

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Shoulders cont. anonymous February 13 2011, 18:30:17 UTC
Shoulders: Part 2

‘Hello’ Edmund grinned, coming around to join Caspian.

Painfully aware of how they were unseen by others and how now would be a horrific time to notice the fact that Edmund’s shoulders were still bare, Caspian gave a pained smile and fussed with his trousers, feeling less like a king and more like an eleven year old girl.

Finishing what he was doing, he turned slightly to watch Edmund. By Aslan, he was so beautiful. Smooth skin and pale-

Caspian frowned slightly, and without thinking about it reached out and ran a finger down Edmund’s neck and along his shoulder. Edmund paused, eyes flicking to Caspian in silent question.

Snatching his hand back, Caspian cleared his throat. ‘You ah, you seem to have caught the sun a bit. On your, uhm, on your sh-shoulders.’

‘Oh, bugger. I forgot. I always burn the most, probably because I’m so pale. I should have remembered.’ Edmund was craning his neck to try and see himself, ending up facing away and putting those lovely (now tinged red) shoulders on display for Caspian’s eyes.

‘I have some lotion for such a thing. You are more than welcome to use some, King Edmund.’

Edmund smiled, ‘Edmund, please. How many times must I tell you Caspian?! And yes, please. That would be grand.’ His eyes flicked to Caspian as he turned around to face him once more. ‘I don’t suppose you could put some on for me?’

Caspian stared, stricken. Put some lotion for the sun burn on Edmund? Rubbing a lotion into those shoulders, while pretending that he didn’t want to kiss, lick, gods, do everything, to those shoulders?!

‘Of course.’

Edmund grinned, and started off towards the ship, Caspian following mutely, despairing inwardly; but stumbling slightly in confusion when Edmund passed Reepicheep by, and the pair shared a wicked glance and a smirk.

‘What in Narnia?’ Caspian thought, trailing behind Edmund who led him into their quarters.

***

Caspian stared forward at the wall; half in shock, half in exhaustion. Edmund was laid bare before him, shoulders covered in a mixture of lotion and Caspian’s seed. Edmund lifted his head and turned to look at Caspian who was still straddling him, and gave him a lazy smile.

‘Well, if I had known all it took was my shoulders and the mere suggestion of you rubbing lotion onto them to get you that excited… hell, I would have done it ages ago.’

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Re: Shoulders cont. timour February 15 2011, 13:07:28 UTC
Love this. Can so imagine poor Caspian. I don't think I would have anymore luck not looking at Edmunds shoulders.

Love this line alot for some reason...
Honestly, looking that beautifully effeminate was bound to get attention, he thought meanly, studiously ignoring the fact that Lucy was also on the ship, and female besides.

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Re: Shoulders cont. anonymous February 15 2011, 21:41:06 UTC
Hello, author of the fic here (shy, and thus, still anonymous!) What a lovely thing to come in from work to: two positive reviews! Glad you both liked it, I love having a 'take-control' Edmund heh!

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Re: Shoulders cont. anonymous February 15 2011, 19:49:41 UTC
Oh this is brilliant. I love the ending and the whole part about sunburn and just the way you worked this all together. This is everything I have in mind when making the request and more. :D

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