I literally only had about 500 words of this written, just kind of vaguely scribbled down, and then, y'know, you guys were all GET OVER YOURSELF AND WRITE SOME JOE/NICK like I told you to be, and then I wrote like 6000 words in this one night. And, okay, it's 3am now, but I really just had to finish this because it's been a LONG TIME COMING.
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YOU ARE AMAZING BEYOND WORDS!!
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because Joe's keeping up, dragging out a note a little longer where Nick falters
idk why that line really got me.
AND THIS
"I want this," says Joe, and stretches, long and taut beside him, and Nick watches the muscles flex and hollow, "I want it to-" he pauses, bites his lip, seeming frustrated. He flops back, body limp and utterly relaxed. "I want this to happen again."
OMG JFC THESE BOYS SLAY ME
reallllly good bb!
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THEY SLAY ME TOO.
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But anyway, this is great. Especially the part about Nick really feeling music, because yes, I am convinced that he is at least two-thirds of the talent in that band. And then, god, I can totally buy into them wanting to be more than a Disney attraction, I really loved that bit because it had the feel of sneaking around in Catholic school to it XD Bad comparison is bad, I know.
And then this: "'Cause...Nicky, this is weird," Joe says, and he's so close now they're almost touching, and Joe's voice breathes the words low and worried. makes it feel so real and conscious and also really hot. So yeah, I kind of love this a lot. <3
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Thank you so much, anyway!! I'm really glad you liked it especially considering you're not reaaally into the JoBros, haha. And I get what you mean about the 'sneaking around in a Catholic school' thing. XD
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Ok so I really loved how you described the way Nick feels about music. Like it's like this force that just kind of grabs hold and won't let go. Because I totally get that feeling. Lying awake until three in the morning because a song is just that huge and powerful and inspiring that it won't get out of your head. Just...gah. That's exactly the way I get when I hear a song like that, so I loved that description.
And I also just kind of loved it as a whole. :) Great job!
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I feel the same way about music, kind of, maybe a little less intense, but I definitely imagine that's the way Nick feels about it. It was hard to describe so I'm glad you got what I meant. And glad you enjoyed it in general! :)
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You don't even understand how much I love this.
It was honest, and real and deeper than most fics, and just... Yup, you're my new favorite.
♥
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