"Giving In", Frank/Dwayne, NC-17

May 21, 2007 18:57

I've been writing a lot of LMS fic lately. I've still got another one on its way. :)

Title: Giving In
Author: likecharity
Pairing: Frank/Dwayne
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Uncle/nephew incest, underage sexuality, possible self-injury triggers, orgasm denial.
Summary: Frank and Dwayne are alone before Olive’s show, and there are a few confessions to ( Read more... )

! [fandom] little miss sunshine, ! [ship] lms: frank/dwayne

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fiorediloto May 21 2007, 19:28:50 UTC
I'm pretty honoured to tell you that you are officially my new goddess in this fandom. That means I'll follow you everywhere, annoy you with my casual comments and *squee* and *gwah* and OMFYOUREALLYWROTEIT etc. etc. etc.

You've been warned. Totally your fault. Totally.

[On a serious note and before my crazy half takes over the control of my body: you're very able in keeping these two very very IC, and I think it's way more difficult than it seems. I'm finding that Frank, for example, is more difficult than Dwayne. Well, that's just my opinion and probably many people won't agree; anyway they surely aren't easy characters. So... what to say? Oh, yes, awesome job.]

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likecharity May 21 2007, 20:24:51 UTC
Your fandom-goddess? That is awesome beyond words. :D You can *squee* and *gwah* all you like as far as I'm concerned. *grins insanely*

I'm so glad you think I keep them in character, I just kind of go with it and then look back and I'm like "OH WAIT. Would he really do that?" so I'm glad you think so. :) I actually find Dwayne more difficult, this is like the first time I've even tried writing anything even vaguely from his POV. For some reason Frank is easier for me.

ANYWAY. Yes. Thank you very very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm sure there will be many more to come. :)

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eryslash May 21 2007, 22:34:40 UTC
YOU JUST KILLED MY BRAIN.

Guuuuuuuuh.
(It's difficult to say anything else. Just: GUH.)

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likecharity May 22 2007, 12:18:12 UTC
*attempts to revive your brain*

Meep.

It was a good type of brain-murder, though, right? :D 'Guh's are good.

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morlockiness May 21 2007, 23:04:59 UTC
That was all smutty and hot and at the same time really actually beautiful.

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likecharity May 22 2007, 12:18:51 UTC
Yay, that's what I was going for! Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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asaiyansmoothie May 22 2007, 06:25:59 UTC
oh my. i LOVED that. really, really i did. you WIN at frank/dwayne. omg the bandage descriptions and the denial and just woah that was amazing and so...REAL.
nice job, and the ending was just how it should be, i thought :)

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likecharity May 22 2007, 12:20:17 UTC
Thank you so much. I was almost squicking myself with the bandage/cuts thing, but I think it worked quite well with their personalities. And denial in incest fics is so much fun, because it's so real. :) Thank you again for your lovely comment, I'm so glad you liked it. :D

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droobless May 22 2007, 07:41:04 UTC
This perfected my day.
I'm so sorry I can't find anything smart to say, but just to let you know; I loved every single bit of this fic. The ending was just perfect :)

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likecharity May 22 2007, 12:21:11 UTC
Seriously? Awesome.
You don't have to have anything smart to say, knowing you enjoyed it is more than enough. :D

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