Pulvis et Umbra Sumus

Sep 11, 2010 20:35

Title: Pulvis et Umbra Sumus

Fandom: Pirates of the Caribbean; Sparrington

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: I have no claim on POTC or the lovely characters who populate it, even if it seems that James Norrington has, somewhat disconcertingly, made himself quite at home in my head with no apparent plans to leave. Jack Sparrow has been dropping by at ( Read more... )

mobilis in mobili, jack sparrow, james norrington

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porridgebird September 12 2010, 20:26:04 UTC
I love that you've continued this series, and (of course) hope it's not the end.

I love the idea of the two of them working together, for such a noble purpose. What a team! They would be unstoppable at anything they set out to do.

I love how Jack is so concerned, that once they're alone, he needs to examine James and just make sure he's really okay - even though they're both immortal. And James is the same with him. That's just how they would be. *melts*

A moment later, Jack shivered as he felt a breath on the side of his neck, followed by a soft kiss as James' hands caressed down his arms. He could feel the warmth of James’ body behind him as the ex-commodore quietly rumbled, "I love you, too, Jack."
*melts further*

And I love that you included that scene at the end of CotBP where Jack gets all into James's space - and James, unlike the Gov, does NOT flinch away. That's such an important moment (I can't even tell you how much thought I have given it!) and I love how you've explained it here.

Amina rocks, as always :-)

tl;dr - Thank you ♥

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likeahurricane7 September 12 2010, 20:36:44 UTC
Well, this is the last story I have planned for this series, and it's definitively the ending, but plot bunnies are always unpredictable. Y'never know when a vignette might pop up.

I enjoy the idea of their teamwork and the shared concern for each other; they're so terribly cool to write when they're working in tandem. I'm happy to provide melty moments. ^_^

The flashback to the CotBP was terribly fun to write, too. Glad you enjoyed it, too. As well as Amina.

You're more than welcome, and thank you for your help on it.

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