Comments | lightisbreaking: BBB Fic - Stay Right Here, part 3

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BBB Fic - Stay Right Here, part 3

Jun 22, 2009 15:41

Part Three

( Part three )

fic, stay right here, bandombigbang, mcr, frank/gerard

Comments 33

colourmeshocked June 23 2009, 12:32:15 UTC

The angst! The slow, delicious angst! My heart's just going frannnnnnnnnnnk :(((((! I loved how the accident just happened so quick like a trainwreck and the both of you built this crazy...intensity that just sucked me in and I kept fretting about the ending but yay for MCR being this FAMILY and getting their shit together..... &hearts! It ended awesomely. Very very awesomely (YAY FOR CORTEZ FILLING IN. I HAVE MAD LOVE FOR HIM)

swagneto June 24 2009, 13:48:00 UTC

Thank you so much ♥ (I HAVE MAD LOVE FOR HIM ALSO :D)

of_evangeline June 23 2009, 13:53:52 UTC

This rendered me to pieces. In the absolute best way. It destroyed me to have to watch Frank go through that, but he has Gerard, and in the end all they need is each other. So basically I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE BOTH YOUR FACES UUUUUUUUGH. ♥_______♥

swagneto June 24 2009, 13:48:22 UTC

WE LOVE YOUR FACE MORE. No but seriously, thank you so much bb, for everything♥

ex_amplifie June 23 2009, 13:55:59 UTC

Wow, you guys. This was intense to read and I'm sure it was just as, if not more, intense to write. In certain scenes, the drift between Gerard and Frank was almost tangible, in the way that you feel a tightness in your chest and throat when you're about to cry. Frank's anger being misdirected, and Gerard's helpless desperation...oh my, what a painful combination.

It's no secret that my favourite part of pretty much any story is the ending: it makes it or breaks it for me. And here, it made it. Despite being a heartbreaking thought, I think it was beautifully executed, with Frank realizing that when one thing is taken away from you, you're given something else that could leave you just as content.

I think it's a beautiful message to send out to us readers, and I adore you both for it. Thank you! ♥♥♥

swagneto June 24 2009, 13:49:02 UTC

This is probably the best comment of my life. Thank you so much babe. I'm so glad that you liked it, and that the ending worked for you. ♥

paperdollkisses June 23 2009, 15:34:56 UTC

Holy Cow, that was an amazing story. Very heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

swagneto June 24 2009, 13:49:20 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

totaled June 24 2009, 05:40:00 UTC

oh.

oh, oh my god.

yeah, i'm broken right now. ♥

swagneto June 24 2009, 13:49:32 UTC

♥