The Naked Man
Title: The Naked Man
Pairing: Fanxing
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~5.7k
Summary: They say it works two out of three times, guaranteed.
A/N: I guess I'm trying to ease my way back into writing more regularly with pwp. But what else is new.
( Yifan knows he’s not the most perceptive all the time, missing on small details and hints and being caught off-guard by things that others say they have seen coming for a while. )
Pairing: Fanxing
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~5.7k
Summary: They say it works two out of three times, guaranteed.
A/N: I guess I'm trying to ease my way back into writing more regularly with pwp. But what else is new.
( Yifan knows he’s not the most perceptive all the time, missing on small details and hints and being caught off-guard by things that others say they have seen coming for a while. )
"For a brief moment Yifan wonders whether he fell asleep on the train ride back home and is dreaming things, or whether someone accidentally slipped him some hallucinogen. Both sound like reasonable explanations for what he’s seeing right in front of him; namely, Zhang Yixing, naked, with nothing but Yifan’s dark green blanket draped around his well-built frame."" PERFECTION!!!!!
I love how the only thing Yifan does is making a noise when he sees a naked Yixing! And how he can't help but drink in the sight of Yixing!
HAHA! I love how dense Yifan was and that Yixing got tired of dropping hints and decided to do this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"He has been imagining how it would feel for so long, but all of his imagination doesn’t do the real thing any justice whatsoever. Yixing’s skin is soft, so unbearably soft, and hot, and Yifan feels himself losing his mind all over again when Yixing abandons his mission of leaving hickeys on the part of Yifan’s neck that is exposed and instead moves up to kiss him again."" LOVED THIS SO MUCH!
"Yifan contemplates a lot of answers, explanations, justifications, but in the end he settles for the simplest thing his brain comes up with: he leans forward and kisses Yixing again, and lets his words ghost against the other’s lips, “Thank you, I love my present.” And as an afterthought, he adds, “And I love you.”
And when Yixing smiles, he knows it was the right answer.
(Although he does get slapped for being cheesy after Yixing kisses him again.)" PEREFCT ENDING!!!!!!
Seriously! This was so amazing and so good and I had so much fun reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how even with the smut it was so soft and sweet!!!! Thanks for writing and sharing! oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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